์ฃผ์‹์ด '์˜ฌ๋ž๋‹ค' '๋‚ด๋ ธ๋‹ค' 'ํญ๋“ฑํ–ˆ๋‹ค' 'ํญ๋ฝํ–ˆ๋‹ค' ๋Š” ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋งํ• ๊นŒ์š”?

๋” ์ง€์ ์ธ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ
by. ์ฑ„ํŒ…์˜์–ด ํ…”๋ผ

> Today's Dose : [์ฃผ์‹]
  1. [์˜ค๋Š˜์˜ ํ‘œํ˜„] ์š”์ƒˆ ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ์–ด๋•Œ์š”?
  2. [๋” ์•Œ์•„๋ณด๊ธฐ] ์ด๋“์„ ๋ดค๋‚˜์š”? ์žƒ์—ˆ๋‚˜์š”?
  3. [์ผ์ƒ ์† ํ‘œํ˜„] ๊ฒฝ์ œ ๊ด€๋ จ ์ผ์ƒ ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค
  4. [๋ณต์Šต] ์ง€๋‚œ์ฃผ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ
๐Ÿ‘ ์ฃผ์‹ ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š” ๊ตฌ๋…์ž๋ถ„ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ ๋ถ™์–ด๋ผ!

์ฝ”๋กœ๋‚˜๊ฐ€ ์‹œ์ž‘๋˜๋ฉด์„œ ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ๊ฒฝ์ œ ๊ณต๋ถ€๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ–ˆ์–ด์š”. ์ €๋„ ์†Œ์†Œํ•˜๊ฒŒ๋‚˜๋งˆ ํˆฌ์ž๋ฅผ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ–ˆ๋‹ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํˆฌ์žํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ข…๋ชฉ์—๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ๊ทธ์ค‘ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ํ•ซํ•œ ๊ฑด ๋‹จ์—ฐ ์ฃผ์‹ ์•„๋‹๊นŒ์š”? ์ €๋Š” ์š”์ฆ˜ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์˜ ์•ˆ๋ถ€๋ณด๋‹ค ์ฃผ์‹์˜ ์•ˆ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ๋” ๋ฌผ์„ ์ผ์ด ๋” ๋งŽ๋„ค์š”. ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์€ ํ˜น์‹œ ์ฃผ์‹ํˆฌ์ž๋ฅผ ํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ณ„์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”?


์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ฃผ์‹, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊ฒฝ์ œ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์ธ ๋‹จ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์“ฐ์ง€ ์•Š์•„์š”. ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด๋„ ๊ทธ๋ ‡์ž–์•„์š”, ์ฃผ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ์˜ฌ๋ž๋‹ค, ๋‚ด๋ ธ๋‹ค ๋˜๋Š” ํญ๋“ฑํ–ˆ๋‹ค, ํญ๋ฝํ–ˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•˜์ฃ . ๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ์ด๋Ÿฌํ•œ ์ „๋ฌธ ์šฉ์–ด๋“ค์€ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?


 ๐Ÿ“ˆ ์š”์ฆ˜ ์ฃผ์‹ ์ข€ ์–ด๋•Œ์š”?
๐Ÿค” Question :๋Œ€ํ™”์˜ ๋ฌผ๊ผฌ๋ฅผ ํ„ฐ ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.

Do you invest in stocks?

์ฃผ์‹ ํˆฌ์žํ•˜์‹œ๋‚˜์š”?


How are your stocks doing?

How are your stocks performing?

์š”์ฆ˜ ์žฅ ์ข€ ์–ด๋•Œ์š”? / ์ฃผ์‹ ์ƒํƒœ๊ฐ€ ์ข€ ์–ด๋•Œ์š”?


๐Ÿค“ Answer :์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์—๊ฒŒ ๋งž๋Š” ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ์ฐพ์•„๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
๐Ÿ‘‰ ์ƒ์Šน์žฅ
Lev. 1 - up n%
ex. My Kakao stocks are up n%.
์นด์นด์˜ค ์ฃผ์‹์ด n% ์˜ฌ๋ž์–ด์š”.

Lev.1 - to rise
ex. My Apple stocks rose n%.
์• ํ”Œ ์ฃผ์‹์ด n% ์˜ฌ๋ž์–ด์š”.

Lev.3 - to skyrocket
ex. My Samsung stocks skyrocketed.
์‚ผ์„ฑ ์ฃผ์‹์ด n% ๊ธ‰๋“ฑํ–ˆ์–ด์š”.

ex. The gas prices have been skyrocketing.
์ตœ๊ทผ ์œ ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ํญ๋“ฑํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”.
*ํญ๋“ฑํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ข‹์€ ๊ฒƒ๋งŒ์€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋„ค์š”.

๐Ÿ‘‰ ํ•˜๋ฝ์žฅ
Lev.1 - to fall
ex. Tesla fell n%.
ํ…Œ์Šฌ๋ผ ์ฃผ์‹์ด n% ๋‚ด๋ ธ์–ด์š”.

Lev. 1 - n% down
ex. My GameStop stocks are n% down.
๊ฒŒ์ž„์Šคํƒ‘ ์ฃผ์‹์ด n% ๋‚ด๋ ธ์–ด์š”.

Lev.2 - to dip
ex. Stock prices dipped last Tuesday.
์ง€๋‚œ์ฃผ ํ™”์š”์ผ ์žฅ์ด ์ž ๊น ํ•˜๋ฝํ–ˆ์—ˆ์–ด์š”.
*Dip์ด๋ž€๊ฑด ์ผ์‹œ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์กฐ๊ธˆ ํ•˜๋ฝํ–ˆ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์›์ƒ๋ณต๊ท€๋˜์—ˆ์Œ์„ ๋งํ•ด์š”.

Lev.3 - to plunge
ํŽ˜์ด์Šค๋ถ์˜ ๋Œ€๋Ÿ‰ ๋งค๊ฐ ์ดํ›„ ์ฃผ์‹์ด ํญ๋ฝํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

Lev.3 - to plummet
ex. US stocks have been plummeting.
์ตœ๊ทผ ๋ฏธ๊ตญ ์žฅ์ด ํญ๋ฝ ์ค‘์ด์—์š”.

Lev.4 - to crash
ex. Will inflation cause the stock market to crash?
๋ฌผ๊ฐ€ ์ƒ์Šน์œผ๋กœ ์ธํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹ ์‹œ์žฅ ๋ถ•๊ดด๊ฐ€ ์ผ์–ด๋‚  ๊ฒƒ์ธ๊ฐ€?
๐Ÿ’ฌ Conversation
๐Ÿ™‚ Hannah, are you investing in stocks?
ํ•œ๋‚˜์•ผ, ์ฃผ์‹ ํˆฌ์žํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด?

๐Ÿ˜‡ Yeah! But only in ETFs and index funds.
์‘! ๊ทผ๋ฐ ETF๋ž‘ ์ธ๋ฑ์Šค ํŽ€๋“œ ์œ„์ฃผ๋กœ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด.

Let me see... They're up 0.1% today. Haha.
์–ด๋”” ๋ณด์ž... ์˜ค๋Š˜ 0.1% ์˜ฌ๋ž๋„ค. ํ•˜ํ•˜.

How about you?
๋„ˆ๋Š” ์–ด๋•Œ?

๐Ÿ˜ฉ I have Samsung and Kakao, but they have not been doing well.
๋‚˜๋Š” ์‚ผ์„ฑ์ด๋ž‘ ์นด์นด์˜ค ํˆฌ์žํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ์„ฑ๊ณผ๊ฐ€ ์ข‹์ง„ ์•Š์•„.

I'm not even keeping track anymore, but I think they're 10% down?
์š”์ฆ˜์—” ๋ณด์ง€๋„ ์•Š์•„. ํ•œ 10%๋Š” ๋–จ์–ด์กŒ์„๊ฑธ?

๐Ÿ˜” There there, they'll all go up someday.
์•„์ด๊ณ  ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์•„. ์–ธ์  ๊ฐ„ ์˜ค๋ฅด๊ฒ ์ง€.

๐Ÿ† Challenge!
์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ตํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

Do you invest in stocks? How have your stocks been performing?
 ๐Ÿ‹๏ธโ€โ™€๏ธ ์ด๋“์„ ๋ดค๋‚˜์š”? ์žƒ์—ˆ๋‚˜์š”?
ํ•˜๋ฝ์žฅ์—์„œ๋„ ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๋Š” ์ด๋“์„ ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ณ , ์ƒ์Šน์žฅ์—์„œ๋„ ์†ํ•ด๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์ƒ๊ธธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ์‹œ์žฅ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‚ด ์ฃผ์‹์ด ์˜ค๋ฅด๊ณ  ๋‚ด๋ ธ๋Š”์ง€ ๋ง๊ณ  ์ด์ œ ์ง„์งœ '์ˆ˜์ต'์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ด ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.
๐Ÿ“š Phrases : ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ๋ฐฐ์›Œ ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค
๐Ÿ‘‰ ์ด๋“์„ ๋ณธ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
Profit / Gains
ex. Did you make any profit/capital gains?
์ด๋“ ๋ณด์…จ์–ด์š”?

To sell at a profit: ์ต์ ˆํ•˜๋‹ค
ex. I sold Alphabet(Google) at 0.31% profit.
์•ŒํŒŒ๋ฒณ(๊ตฌ๊ธ€) ์ฃผ์‹ 0.31% ์ด๋“ ๋ณด๊ณ  ์ต์ ˆํ–ˆ์–ด์š”.

๐Ÿ‘‰ ์†ํ•ด๋ฅผ ๋ณธ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ
Loss 
ex. I had to sell my stocks at a loss.
์ œ ์ฃผ์‹์„ ์†ํ•ด ๋ณด๊ณ  ํŒ”์•„์•ผ ํ–ˆ์–ด์š”.

To cut losses: ์†์ ˆํ•˜๋‹ค
ex. I had to cut my losses. I was losing too much.
๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์ด ์žƒ์–ด์„œ ์†์ ˆํ•ด์•ผ ํ–ˆ์–ด์š”.

๐Ÿ’ฌ Conversation
๐Ÿ˜— Did you sell your stocks at a profit?
์ฃผ์‹ ํŒ” ๋•Œ ์ต์ ˆํ•˜์…จ๋‚˜์š”?

๐Ÿฅฒ No, unfortunately it was the opposite.
์•„๋‡จ, ์•ˆํƒ€๊น๊ฒŒ๋„ ๊ทธ ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€์˜€์–ด์š”.

๐Ÿ’ธ I was losing too much money, so I had to cut my losses.
๋ˆ์„ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์ด ์žƒ์–ด์„œ ์†์ ˆํ•ด์•ผ ํ–ˆ๋„ค์š”.

๐Ÿ† Challenge!
์•„๋ž˜ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ตํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
Hint: ์†์ต์€ ์ด๋ฏธ ๋ฐœ์ƒํ•œ ํ›„์—์•ผ ๋…ผ์˜ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์œผ๋‹ˆ ๊ณผ๊ฑฐํ˜•์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์…”์•ผ ํ•ด์š”!

Were there any stocks that you sold at a loss/profit?
 ๐Ÿฅท Tip: '๊ฒฝ์ œ' ๊ด€๋ จ ์ƒํ™œ ์† ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค
๊ทธ ์™ธ์—๋„ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฒฝ์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ์ ์šฉ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ƒํ™œ ์† ๋‹จ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์•Œ๋ ค ๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š”. ์ œ๊ฐ€ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋ณธ ์œ ํŠœ๋ธŒ ์˜์ƒ์—์„œ ์“ฐ์˜€๋˜ ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!

astronomical amount
์ฒœ๋ฌธํ•™์ ์ธ ๊ธˆ์•ก
ex. He had to pay an astronomical amount in fines.
๊ทธ๋Š” ์ฒœ๋ฌธํ•™์ ์ธ ๊ธˆ์•ก์˜ ๋ฒŒ๊ธˆ์„ ๋ฌผ์–ด์•ผ ํ–ˆ์–ด์š”.

far too little
๊ณผ๋„ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ ์€
ex. You're charging far too little.
๋ˆ์„ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ณผ๋„ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ ๊ฒŒ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์žˆ๋„ค์š”.

The industry is booming.
์—…๊ณ„๊ฐ€ ํ˜ธํ™ฉ์„ ๋ˆ„๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”.
ex. You should get into Metaverse. The industry is booming.
๋ฉ”ํƒ€๋ฒ„์Šค ์‹œ์ž‘(๊ณต๋ถ€)ํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ์—…๊ณ„๊ฐ€ ์ง„์งœ ํ˜ธํ™ฉ์„ ๋ˆ„๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”.

to make bank (slang)
๋ˆ์„ ์ •๋ง ๋งŽ์ด ๋ฒŒ๋‹ค
ex. You can make bank if you know how to code.
์ฝ”๋”ฉ์„ ์•Œ๋ฉด ๋ˆ์„ ์ •๋ง ๋งŽ์ด ๋ฒŒ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

to lead to inflation
์ธํ”Œ๋ ˆ์ด์…˜์„ ์•ผ๊ธฐ์‹œํ‚ค๋‹ค
ex. Many factors can lead to inflation.
์ธํ”Œ๋ ˆ์ด์…˜์„ ์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์š”์†Œ์—๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๐Ÿ† Challenge!
์œ„ ํ‘œํ˜„ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ์ž‘๋ฌธํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
 ๐Ÿ’ก ์ง€๋‚œ ์ฃผ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ

์šฐ์™€, ์ง€๋‚œ์ฃผ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๋ถ„๋“ค์ด ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ๋ณด๋‚ด ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊นœ์ง ๋†€๋ž์–ด์š”. ์ด๋ฒˆ์—๋„ ์—ญ์‹œ ๋ฉ‹์ง„ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์ด ๋งŽ์•˜๋Š”๋ฐ์š”, ๊ทธ์ค‘ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐ€์ง€๋ฅผ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๋ ค๊ณ  ๊ฐ€์ ธ์™”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๋ณด์‹ค๊นŒ์š”?

๐Ÿ’ฌ Last Week's Feedback
So close!

1)
I don't like exciting sports so I try to static excercise just like yoga or streching haha..^^;;
>>> I don't like *extreme sports so I try *static *exercises like yoga or stretching.

2)
Usually, I'd like to play golf at a field about third time a month.
>>> *I'd like to play golf *on a course about *three times a month.

3)
I lose weight a little and get nice muscles!
>>> I *lost a little weight and *gained muscles!

4)
Yeah I taking Platess class and i like to golf recently.
>>> Yeah, I *am taking *Pilates *classes and I like to *golf.

5)
I donโ€™t have any time to do these days because I am studying for the test.
>>> I don't have time to do *that these days because I am studying for *a test.

6)
I feel better than the last year.
>>> I feel better than *last year.
1)
- ๋งˆ์šดํ‹ด ๋ฐ”์ดํฌ, ์•”๋ฒฝ๋“ฑ๋ฐ˜๊ฐ™์ด ๊ฒฉ๋ ฌํ•œ ์šด๋™์€ extreme sports๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
- '์ •์ ์ธ ์šด๋™'์„ ์นดํ…Œ๊ณ ๋ฆฌ๋กœ ์žก์•„์„œ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋ณต์ˆ˜ 'exercises'๋กœ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2)
- Usually๋Š” ํ‰๊ท ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ž์ฃผ ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๋Š” ์ผ๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์“ฐ์ด๋ฉฐ 'I'd like to'๋Š” ์ฃผ๋กœ ์•„์ง ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜์ง€ ์•Š์€ ์ผ์— ์“ฐ์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋‘˜ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋งŒ ์„ ํƒํ•˜์…”์•ผ ํ•ด์š”!
- ๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ํ‰์†Œ์— ์ฃผ๊ธฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋ง์”€ํ•˜์‹œ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์œผ์‹œ๋‹ค๋ฉด 'I'd like to play golf *regularly'๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜์…”๋„ ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :)
- ์ด ๋ถ€๋ถ„์€ ์ œ๊ฐ€ ๊ณจํ”„๋ฅผ ์•ˆ ์ณ์„œ ์ •ํ™•์ง€ ์•Š์ง€๋งŒ, ๊ตฌ๊ธ€๋งํ•ด๋ณด๋‹ˆ on a course๋ผ๊ณ  ๋” ๋งŽ์ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”! Field๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด '*out on the field'๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3) 
- ๊ทผ์œก์„ ์ฆ๋Ÿ‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋งํ•  ๋• 'gain'์„ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
- ์ด๋ฏธ ์ผ์–ด๋‚œ ์‹ ์ฒด์  ๋ณ€ํ™”์ด๋‹ˆ ๊ณผ๊ฑฐํ˜•์„ ์จ์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

4)
- recently๋Š” I've been~ ํŒจํ„ด๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์›Œ์š”.
- 1๋ฒˆ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์ด 'ํ•„๋ผํ…Œ์Šค ์ˆ˜์—…'์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ทธ ์ž์ฒด์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋ณต์ˆ˜์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

5)
- ๋ชฉ์ ์–ด๊ฐ€ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค...! What do you not have time to do?
- the test๋ผ๊ณ  ์“ฐ์‹œ๋ ค๋ฉด ์–ด๋–ค ์ˆ˜์—…์ธ์ง€ ๋ฌธ๋งฅ์ƒ ์ดํ•ด๊ฐ€ ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ '์‹œํ—˜๊ณต๋ถ€'๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜์‹œ๋ ค๋ฉด a test๋ผ๊ณ  ์จ ์ฃผ์…”์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :)

6)
- the past year๋Š” ์˜ค๋Š˜๋ถ€ํ„ฐ 1๋…„ ์ „, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  last year๋Š” '์ž‘๋…„'์„ ๋งํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

More tiny errors

I have to make dinner, wash dishes and make tomorrow meal haha...
>>> I have to make dinner, wash *the dishes and make *the next day's meal haha...
Or >>> *do the dishes

Iโ€™ve been taking speed skate lessons since last year March with my children once a week. 
>>> Iโ€™ve been taking speed *skating lessons since last year *in March with my children once a week.

I like to play golf with my close friends and I usually go to gym to work out.
>>> I like to play golf with my close friends and I usually go to *the gym to work out.

I like to excercise on weekend.
>>> I like to exercise on *the weekend.

I want to work out everyday... but too hard.
>>> I want to work out everyday... but *it's too hard.

So I started to take Pilates lessons and then Itโ€™s been 3 months.
>>> So I started to take Pilates lessons and *it's been 3 months. (then x)

Twice a week. I try to go many as possible.
>>> Twice a week. I try to go *as many *times as possible.

I used to do yoga or walking at park.
>>> I used to do yoga or *go for a walk in the park.

I'm doing home work out nowadays.
>> I'm *working out at home nowadays.
์ž‘์€ ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๋“ค ์ค‘์—์„œ๋Š” ๋ณดํ†ต ์ฃผ์–ด/๋™์‚ฌ/๋ชฉ์ ์–ด ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๊ฐ€ ์—†๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ the๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ณณ์— ์—†๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์ž์ฃผ ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ์‹ค์ˆ˜๋Š” ์ถ”ํ›„ ๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ์—์„œ ํ•œ๋ฒˆ ๋‹ค๋ฃฐ๊ฒŒ์š”!

Correct, but could be better!

Because I had been so lazy in 2021, I had been out of shape at that time.
>>> I *was so out of shape in 2021 because I had been so lazy.
Out of shape๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ at that time์„ ์“ด๋‹ค๋ฉด '๊ทธ ๋•Œ' ์ฒด๋ ฅ์ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ–ˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋œป์ด ๋˜๋‹ˆ ๊ณง ์ด์   ์ฒด๋ ฅ/์ฒดํ˜•์„ ๋‹ค์‹œ ์ฐพ์œผ์…จ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด out of shape๋Š” ํ˜„์žฌ๊นŒ์ง€ ์ด์–ด์ง€์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ๊ณผ๊ฑฐ์—์„œ ๋๋‚œ ์ƒํƒœ๊ฐ€ ๋˜๋‹ˆ had been์ด ์•„๋‹Œ was๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ์ฃผ์…”์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. 

์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋„ ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•˜์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”!
๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ฝ๊ณ  ๊ฐ ์„น์…˜๋ณ„ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๋ฉด ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํŠœํ„ฐ๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ์ค‘ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ผ ์ฒจ์‚ญ์„ ํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐฐ์šด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ '๋‚ด ๊ฒƒ'์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ง์ ‘ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•ด ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ•„์ˆ˜์ธ ๊ฒƒ ์•„์‹œ์ฃ ? ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๋˜์‹ ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ผญ ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š” :)
โœ๏ธ ์ธ์Šคํƒ€๋กœ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๊ธฐ

์ •๊ธฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ธ์Šคํƒ€๊ทธ๋žจ์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”.


๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฃฌ ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์ง์ ‘ ์จ ๋ณด์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๋Œ“๊ธ€์ด๋‚˜ ์Šคํ† ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ž‘๋ฌธ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ๋„์™€๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์—๊ฒŒ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ๋ฐ›์•„ ๋ณด์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐํšŒ์ด๋‹ˆ ์ ๊ทน์ ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ๋ณด์‹œ๊ธธ ๊ถŒ์žฅ๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š” :)

๐Ÿ–‹ Editor's Note
์˜ค๋Š˜ ์ค€๋น„ํ•œ ๋น„ํƒ€๋ฏผ์€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€.
์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๋ชจ๋“  ํˆฌ์ž์ž์‚ฐ์ด ๊ฑด์Šนํ•˜์‹œ๊ธธ
์ง„์‹ฌ์œผ๋กœ ๋ฐ”๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ€์ฆˆ์•„~!

๋งค์ฃผ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ์˜์–ด ์ปจํ…์ธ ์™€ ๊ณต๋ถ€๋ฒ•์„ ๋ชจ์•„์„œ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋“œ๋ ค์š”.
ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์€ ์–ธ์ œ๋“  ๐Ÿ‘‡ํ•˜๋‹จ ํผ์œผ๋กœ ์•Œ๋ ค์ฃผ์„ธ์š”
์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์†Œ์ค‘ํ•œ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :)

๐Ÿ’™์ด ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค
๐Ÿ’ซํ† ๊ธฐ ๐Ÿ’‹Sarah ๐Ÿ’งYuha ๐ŸŒŸLucia

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