#์ผ์ƒ์˜์–ด #์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ #์ฃผ๋ง๊ณ„ํš #์Šค๋ชฐํ†ก

๋” ์ง€์ ์ธ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ
by. ์ฑ„ํŒ…์˜์–ด ํ…”๋ผ

> Today's Dose : [์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ]
  1. [์˜ค๋Š˜์˜ ํ‘œํ˜„] '๋Œ€์ฒญ์†Œ' ๊ด€๋ จ ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„
  2. [๋” ๋ฐฐ์›Œ๋ณด๊ธฐ] My house, my rules
  3. [์˜ค๋Š˜์˜ ๊ฟ€ํŒ] '์ฝ”์ธ ๋นจ๋ž˜๋ฐฉ'์€ ์˜์–ด๋กœ?
  4. [๋ณต์Šต] ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ
๐Ÿงน ์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ์€ ์—ญ์‹œ ๋ชฐ์•„์„œ ํ•ด์•ผ ์ œ๋ง›!

์„ค๊ฑฐ์ง€, ๋นจ๋ž˜, ์ฒญ์†Œ๊ธฐ ๋Œ๋ฆฌ๊ธฐ... ๋‚ด ๋ชธ์€ ํ•˜๋‚˜์ธ๋ฐ ์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ์€ ์™œ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์Œ“์ด๋Š”์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์–ด์š”. ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ์กฑ์กฑ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜์‹œ๋Š” ๋ถ€์ง€๋Ÿฐํ•œ ๋ถ„๋“ค๋„ ๊ณ„์‹œ๊ฒ ์ง€๋งŒ ์ €๋Š” ์ฃผ์ค‘์—” ํ‡ด๊ทผ ํ›„ ๋ป—์–ด์žˆ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ์ฃผ๋ง์— ๋ชฐ์•„์„œ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๋Š” ํŽธ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๐Ÿ˜…


๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€ ์ฃผ์ค‘์— '์ฃผ๋ง์— ๋ญํ•ด?'๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณด๋ฉด ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„ ์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ์„ ํ•œ๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋Œ€๋‹ตํ•ด์š”. ํœด๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ๋‚ด๋Š” ๋‚ ์ด๋ฉด ํ‰์†Œ์— ๋ฐ”๋น ์„œ ๋ฏธ์ฒ˜ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜์ง€ ๋ชปํ–ˆ๋˜ ์€ํ–‰ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธ, ๋ณ‘์› ์ˆœํšŒ ๋“ฑ ์žก์ผ์„ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์ฃ . ์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์ €์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ์„ ํ•  ์ผ์ด ๋งŽ์€ ๋ถ„์ด ์œ ์šฉํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์“ฐ์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณผ ํ…๋ฐ์š”, ์ฒญ์†Œ, ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ์žก๋ฌด, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋‚˜์˜ ์ง‘์—์„œ์˜ ๊ทœ์น™์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์›Œ๋ณผ๊ฒŒ์š”.


 ๐Ÿงบ  '๋Œ€์ฒญ์†Œ' ๊ด€๋ จ ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„
๐Ÿ’ก Phrases: ์•Œ์•„ ๋‘์–ด์•ผ ํ•  ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค

deep-clean: ๋Œ€์ฒญ์†Œ
ex. I am going to deep-clean my house this weekend.

์ฃผ๋ง์— ๋Œ€์ฒญ์†Œํ•  ๊ฑฐ์•ผ.


housework: ์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ

ex. Oh god. I have so much housework to do.

์–ดํœด. ์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ ํ•  ๊ฑฐ ์ง„์งœ ๋งŽ๋„ค.


vacuum/mop: ์ฒญ์†Œ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋Œ๋ฆฌ๋‹ค/๊ฑธ๋ ˆ์งˆํ•˜๋‹ค
ex. Who's in charge of vacuuming and mopping the house?

์ฒญ์†Œ๊ธฐ๋ž‘ ๊ฑธ๋ ˆ์งˆ ๋‹ด๋‹น ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์•ผ?


get groceries: ์žฅ์„ ๋ณด๋‹ค
My fridge is completely empty. I need to go get some groceries.

๋ƒ‰์žฅ๊ณ ๊ฐ€ ํ……ํ…… ๋น„์—ˆ๋„ค. ์žฅ ๋ณด๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐ€์•ผ๊ฒ ์–ด.

*go grocery shopping์ด๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„๋„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


take out the trash: ์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๋‹ค
I need to take out the trash. The smell is killing me.

์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐ ๋ฒ„๋ ค์•ผ๊ฒ ์–ด. ๋ƒ„์ƒˆ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ฃฝ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„.


meal prep: ๋„์‹œ๋ฝ(์‹์‚ฌ) ์ค€๋น„
I started meal prep ever since I began working out.

์šด๋™ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ๋„์‹œ๋ฝ ์‹ธ๋†“๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ–ˆ์–ด.

*๋ฏธ๊ตญ์—์„œ ํ•œ์ฐฝ Meal prep์ด ์œ ํ–‰ํ–ˆ๋˜ ์ ์ด ์žˆ์—ˆ์–ด์š”. ๋ฐ”์˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋‹ค์ด์–ดํŠธ๋ฅผ ํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค, ๋˜๋Š” ์Œ์‹๋ฌผ ์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ์ค„์ด๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์‹์žฌ๋ฃŒ๋ฅผ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ์†์งˆํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์š”๋ฆฌํ•ด์„œ ์–ผ๋ ค ๋‘์–ด ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๊บผ๋‚ด ๋จน์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๋„์‹œ๋ฝ์„ ์ค€๋น„ํ•ด ๋†“๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋งํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (๋ถ€๊ฐ€ ์„ค๋ช…: ์•„ํ‹ฐํด)


overdue: ์ด๋ฏธ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•  ๊ธฐํ•œ์ด ์ง€๋‚œ

I really need to do the laundry this weekend. It's so long overdue.

์ด๋ฒˆ ์ฃผ๋ง์—” ๊ผญ ๋นจ๋ž˜ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ด. ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์˜ค๋ž˜ ์ง€๋‚ฌ์–ด.


piled up: ์Œ“์•„ ๋†“๋‹ค
ex. I have heaps of dishes piled up at home.

์ง‘์— ์„ค๊ฑฐ์ง“๊ฑฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ฌด๋”๊ธฐ๋กœ ์Œ“์—ฌ ์žˆ์–ด.


procrastinate: ํ•  ์ผ์„ ๋ฏธ๋ฃจ๋‹ค

ex. I procrastinated until the very end.

ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๋•Œ๊นŒ์ง€ ํ•  ์ผ์„ ๋ฏธ๋ค˜์–ด.


run errands: ์žก์ผ์„ ๋๋‚ด๋‹ค, ๋ณผ์ผ์„ ๋ณด๋‹ค

Let me run some errands first, and then I'll catch up with you guys.

๋จผ์ € ๋ณผ์ผ ์ข€ ๋ณด๊ณ  ๋”ฐ๋ผ์žก์„๊ฒŒ.

๐Ÿ’ฌ Conversation
A: Hey Evelyn, what are your plans for the weekend?
์•ˆ๋…• ์—๋ธ”๋ฆฐ, ์ฃผ๋ง์— ๋ฌด์Šจ ๊ณ„ํš ์žˆ์–ด?

B: I'm going to deep-clean the house for once. I have so much housework to do.
์ด๋ฒˆ์—” ๊ผญ ๋Œ€์ฒญ์†Œํ•˜๋ ค๊ณ . ์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ ํ•  ๊ฒŒ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์•„.

A: Oh, like what?
B: ์•„ํ•˜, ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ฉด?

B: I have to take care of all the laundry piled up at home, 
์ง‘์— ์Œ“์—ฌ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋นจ๋ž˜๋ฅผ ๋‹ค ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๊ณ ,

vacuum, mop the floor, do the dishes, do meal prep, and take out the trash. Phew.
์ฒญ์†Œ๊ธฐ ๋Œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ , ๊ฑธ๋ ˆ์งˆํ•˜๊ณ , ์„ค๊ฑฐ์ง€๋„ ํ•˜๊ณ , ์Œ์‹ ์†์งˆ๋„ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ํ•ด ๋†“๊ณ , ์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐ๋„ ๋ฒ„๋ ค์•ผ ํ•ด. ์–ดํœด.

A: Wowza! you really have a lot to do huh?
์œผ์–ต! ์ง„์งœ ํ•  ๊ฒŒ ๋งŽ๋‚˜ ๋ณด๋„ค.
*Wowza! ๋Š” ์Šฌ๋žญ ๊ฐํƒ„์‚ฌ๋กœ ์—„์ฒญ๋‚œ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ณด์•˜์„ ๋•Œ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„์Šทํ•œ ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ๋Š” oh gosh, whoa, oh wow ๋“ฑ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (Urban Dictionary ์ฐธ๊ณ )

B: Yeah. They're all long overdue though. I procrastinated way too much.
์‘. ๊ทผ๋ฐ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ํ•ด ๋†จ์–ด์•ผ ํ–ˆ๋˜ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด์•ผ. ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์˜ค๋ž˜ ๋ฏธ๋ค„์„œ...

How about you? Do you have any plans?
๋„Œ ์–ด๋•Œ? ๊ณ„ํš ์žˆ์–ด?

A: I just need to run some errands, and that's it.
๋‚˜๋Š” ๊ทธ๋ƒฅ ๋ณผ์ผ ์ข€ ๋ณด๊ณ  ๊ทธ๊ฒŒ ๋์ด์•ผ.
๐Ÿ† Challenge!

์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋˜๋Š” ์ฃผ๋ง์— ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ์ง‘์•ˆ์ผ์ด ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”? ์–ด๋–ค ๊ฒƒ์ธ์ง€ ๋งํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

 ๐Ÿ”ฌ My house, my rules
๋กœ๋งˆ์—์„  ๋กœ๋งˆ๋ฒ•์„ ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ผ๋Š” ๋ง์ด ์žˆ๋“ฏ, ๋‚ด ์ง‘์—์„  ๋‚ด ๊ทœ์น™์„ ๋”ฐ๋ผ์•ผ์ฃ . ๋‚จ์ด ์ง‘์— ๋†€๋Ÿฌ ์™”์„ ๋•Œ, ์ ˆ๋Œ€ ์–ด๊ธฐ์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์œผ๋ฉด ํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋งŒ์˜ ๊ทœ์น™์ด ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”? ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ฉด ์˜ท์„ ๊ฐˆ์•„์ž…์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ์นจ๋Œ€์— ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ„๋‹ค๋˜๊ฐ€, ์„œ๋ž์„ ์—ด์–ด๋ณธ๋‹ค๋˜๊ฐ€, ๋ถˆ์„ ๋„์ง€ ์•Š๋Š”๋‹ค๋˜๊ฐ€...์œผ ์ƒ๊ฐ๋งŒ ํ•ด๋„ ์น˜๊ฐ€ ๋–จ๋ฆฌ๋„ค์š”๐Ÿ˜ฌ.

์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ '๋ฌด์–ธ๊ฐ€๋ฅผ ๊ฒฌ๋”œ ์ˆ˜ ์—†์„ ๋•Œ' ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” I can't stand~๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ๋ฐฐ์›Œ๋ณผ๊ฒŒ์š”.
๐Ÿ’ก Pattern: ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ํ‹€์ด ๋˜๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
I can't stand it when people __________.
๋‚˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ___________ ํ•  ๋•Œ ์ ˆ๋Œ€ ๋ชป ๊ฒฌ๋ŽŒ.

๐Ÿ’ก Answers: ์›ํ•˜๋Š” ๋‹ต๋ณ€์œผ๋กœ ๋นˆ์นธ์„ ์ฑ„์›Œ ๋„ฃ์–ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
lie on my bed without changing
์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์˜ท์„ ๊ฐˆ์•„์ž…์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ๋‚ด ์นจ๋Œ€์— ๋ˆ„์šธ ๋•Œ

leave their clothes lying around
์ž๊ธฐ ์˜ท์„ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์ €๊ธฐ ๋Š˜์–ด๋†“์„ ๋•Œ

touch my stuff without asking me
๋‚ด ๋ฌผ๊ฑด์„ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณด์ง€๋„ ์•Š๊ณ  ๋ง˜๋Œ€๋กœ ๋งŒ์งˆ ๋•Œ
*stuff์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด informal ํ•ด ๋ณด์ธ๋‹ค๋ฉด belongings๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋กœ ๋Œ€์ฒดํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

don't turn off the light when leaving the room
๋ฐฉ์„ ๋‚˜๊ฐ€๋ฉด์„œ ๋ถˆ์„ ๋„์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๋•Œ

don't clean up after themselves
์ž์‹ ์ด ์–ด์งˆ๋Ÿฌ ๋†“์€ ๊ฒƒ์„ ์น˜์šฐ์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๋•Œ

don't do the dishes right after they finish eating
์‹์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ๋‹ค ๋๋‚ธ ํ›„ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์„ค๊ฑฐ์ง€ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ๋•Œ

๐Ÿ† Challenge!

๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์ ˆ๋Œ€ ์นจํ•ดํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•˜์œผ๋ฉด ํ•˜๋Š” ๋‚ด ๊ณต๊ฐ„๋งŒ์˜ ๊ทœ์น™์ด ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?
์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋ฐฐ์šด ํŒจํ„ด์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ์ž‘๋ฌธํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!

 ๐Ÿงผ '์ฝ”์ธ ๋นจ๋ž˜๋ฐฉ'์€ ์˜์–ด๋กœ?
ํ•ด์™ธ์— ๋ฐฐ๋‚ญ์—ฌํ–‰์„ ๊ฐ€๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋ฉด ์ฝ”์ธ ๋นจ๋ž˜๋ฐฉ์„ ์ž์ฃผ ์ด์šฉํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜์ž–์•„์š”. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ์ด๊ณณ์„ ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ๋•Œ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ๋“ค์ด coin laundry๋ผ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ์ž์ฃผ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋”๋ผ๊ณ ์š”.

ํ˜น์‹œ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‹จ์–ด ๋“ค์–ด ๋ณด์…จ๋‚˜์š”?
laundromat: ์ฝ”์ธ ๋นจ๋ž˜๋ฐฉ

self-service laundry: ์…€ํ”„๋กœ ์šด์˜๋˜๋Š” ๋นจ๋ž˜๋ฐฉ

coin-op(coin-operated) laundry: ๋™์ „์„ ๋„ฃ์–ด ์ž‘๋™์‹œํ‚ค๋Š” ์„ธํƒ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋นจ๋ž˜๋ฐฉ

๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ์„ธํƒ์†Œ๋Š”...?

dry cleaners: ๋“œ๋ผ์ดํด๋ฆฌ๋‹  ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณณ
ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๋”! ๋ณดํ†ต '์ด๋ถˆ'์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ๋•Œ ํ˜น์‹œ 'blanket'์„ ์“ฐ์‹œ๋‚˜์š”?

์ด๊ฒƒ ๋˜ํ•œ ํ•ด์™ธ์— ๋‚˜๊ฐ€ ๋ณด๋‹ˆ ์—ฌ๋ฆ„ ์ด๋ถˆ์ด๋‚˜ ์ž‘์€ ๋ฌด๋ฆŽ ๋‹ด์š”๋ฅผ ๋œปํ•˜๋Š” ๋ง์ด๋”๋ผ๊ณ ์š”. ๊ทธ๋Ÿผ ๊ฒจ์šธ ์ด๋ถˆ์„ ๋‹ฌ๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•  ๋• ๋ญ๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋ƒ๊ณ ์š”?

๊ฒจ์šธ ์ด๋ถˆ์€ ์˜์–ด๋กœ...
comforter: ์†œ์ด ๋“ค์–ด์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒจ์šธ ์ด๋ถˆ

์•Œ์•„๋ณด๋Š” ๊น€์— ์ „๊ธฐ์žฅํŒ์€...?
electric mattress pad: ์ „๊ธฐ์žฅํŒ

heated mattress pad: ์˜จ์—ด์žฅํŒ

electric blanket: ์ „๊ธฐ๋‹ด์š”
*๊นŒ๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์œ„์— ๋ฎ๋Š” ์šฉ๋„๋กœ ์ฃผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ผ์š”! (๊ตฌ๊ธ€ ๊ฒ€์ƒ‰ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ ์ฐธ๊ณ )
๊ทธ๋Ÿผ '์ด๋ถˆ ๋นจ๋ž˜'๋Š” ๋ญ๋ผ๊ณ  ํ• ๊นŒ์š”?

๊ฐœ์ธ์ ์ธ ๊ฒฌํ•ด๋กœ๋Š” '์ด๋ถˆ ๋นจ๋ž˜'๋Š” ํ•œ๊ตญ์—์„œ ์ž์ฃผ ์“ฐ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ด๊ณ , ๋™์˜์–ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„์€ wash the sheets๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹๊นŒ ์‹ถ์–ด์š”. ์„œ์–‘์—์„œ๋Š” ๋งคํŠธ๋ฆฌ์Šค์— ์ปค๋ฒ„ ์™ธ์—๋„ ์นจ๋Œ€ ์‹œํŠธ๋ฅผ ๊น”๊ณ  ์ด๊ฒƒ์„ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ด๋ถˆ๋“ค๋ณด๋‹ค ์ž์ฃผ ๋น ๋Š”๋ฐ์š”, ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” ์ด๋ถˆ ๋นจ์•˜๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•  ๋•Œ wash my bed sheets๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•˜์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ ์™ธ์—๋Š” doing the laundry๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ชจ๋“  ๋นจ๋ž˜๋ฅผ ํฌ๊ด„ํ•ด์„œ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•œ๋‹ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ํ˜น์‹œ ์—ฌํ–‰ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ํ‘œํ˜„ ๋“ค์–ด๋ณด์‹  ๋ถ„ ์žˆ์œผ์‹œ๋ฉด ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋‹ต์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ๊ผญ ์•Œ๋ ค์ฃผ์„ธ์š”!
๐Ÿ† Challenge!

Fill in the blank. ๋นˆ์นธ์„ ์ฑ„์›Œ ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

I need to look for the nearest __________. I exchanged some coins already.

 ๐Ÿ’ก ์ง€๋‚œ ์ฃผ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ
๐Ÿ’ฌ Last Week's Feedback
For [Layla]
This graph displaied that we have to conduct breaking down and analysing the issue.
>>> This graph *displayed that we have to *break down and *analyse the issue.

The earning rate which is increase get peak.
>>> The *earnings rate *peaked.

Q. '์ˆ˜์ต๋ฅ '์˜ ๋˜๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์˜์–ด ๋‹จ์–ด๊ฐ€ ๊ถ๊ธˆํ•ด์š”.
>>> Earnings rate๋Š” ํˆฌ์ž ๊ด€๋ จํ•˜์—ฌ ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋˜์–ด์š”. ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ…์—์„œ ์ˆ˜์ต๋ฅ ์€ profit, ๋˜๋Š” profit margin์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
Very good, Layla! You used a lot of words that we learned this week, which is awesome.

Here's my feedback:
- ๋งŽ์€ ๊ตฌ๋…์ž๋ถ„๋“ค์ด ํ•œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์— ์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋ฐฐ์šด ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ๋‹ค ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์‹œ๋ ค๊ณ  ๋ฌด๋ฆฌํ•˜์‹œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š” ^-ใ…  ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์ข‹์€ ์‹œ๋„์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์—๋Š” conduct๋Š” ๊ผญ ํ•„์š”๊ฐ€ ์—†๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ผ์„œ ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ๋ช…๋ฃŒํ•จ์— ์•…์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฏธ์น  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. Wordy, verbose(์žฅํ™ฉ)ํ•ด์ง€์ง€ ์•Š๋„๋ก ๊ผญ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋‹จ์–ด๋งŒ ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๋Šฅ๋ ฅ๋„ ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ! ๊ผญ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์‹œ๊ธธ ๋ฐ”๋ผ์š”.
- ์ €๋ผ๋ฉด The graph๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ทธ๋ž˜ํ”„๊ฐ€ ๋งํ•ด์ฃผ๋Š” '์ •๋ณด'์— ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๋ฉด~ ์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„์š”. ์ง€๋‚œ ์ฃผ์— ๋ฐฐ์šด ํ‘œํ˜„ ์ค‘์—์„œ๋Š” 'The downward trend'๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์ฃ . ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์ฃผ์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋ณ€๊ฒฝ๋˜์–ด ๋Œ€์ƒ์ด ๊ทธ๋ž˜ํ”„ ๋“ฑ ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ง€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์•„๋‹ ๊ฒฝ์šฐ displayed ๋Œ€์‹  indicated(๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋‹ค)๋ผ๋Š” ๋™์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋” ์ ํ•ฉํ•˜๋‹ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!
= The downward trend in revenue indicated that we need to break down and analyze the issue.
- ์ด ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋Š” ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ตฌ๋…์ž๋ถ„๋“ค์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์•Œ๋ ค๋“œ๋ ค์š”. Analyse๋Š” ์˜๊ตญ, ํ˜ธ์ฃผ์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋˜๋Š” ํ‘œ๊ธฐ๋ฒ•์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์˜ค๋ฅ˜๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
  
์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋„ ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•˜์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”!
๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ฝ๊ณ  ๊ฐ ์„น์…˜๋ณ„ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๋ฉด ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํŠœํ„ฐ๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ์ค‘ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ผ ์ฒจ์‚ญ์„ ํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐฐ์šด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ '๋‚ด ๊ฒƒ'์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ง์ ‘ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•ด ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ•„์ˆ˜์ธ ๊ฒƒ ์•„์‹œ์ฃ ? ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๋˜์‹ ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ผญ ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š” :)


์ธ์Šคํƒ€๋กœ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๊ธฐ

์ •๊ธฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ธ์Šคํƒ€๊ทธ๋žจ์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”.


๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฃฌ ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์ง์ ‘ ์จ ๋ณด์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๋Œ“๊ธ€์ด๋‚˜ ์Šคํ† ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ž‘๋ฌธ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ๋„์™€๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์—๊ฒŒ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ๋ฐ›์•„ ๋ณด์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐํšŒ์ด๋‹ˆ ์ ๊ทน์ ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ๋ณด์‹œ๊ธธ ๊ถŒ์žฅ๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š” :)

์ด๋ฒˆ์ฃผ๋„ ์ฑ„ํŒ…์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด์‹ค๋ ฅ UP!


์ฑ„ํŒ…์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ๋ฐ”์œ ํ•˜๋ฃจ์—๋„ ์˜์–ด๊ณต๋ถ€๋ฅผ ๋†“์น˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.
๊พธ์ค€ํ•จ์„ ๋†“์•„ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๋ฉด ๋‹ค์‹œ ๊ณต๋ถ€๋ชจ๋“œ๋กœ ๋Œ์•„์˜ค๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ต๋‹ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๋ฒˆ ์ฃผ๋„ ์ˆ˜์—…์„ ์˜ˆ์•ฝํ•˜๋Ÿฌ ๊ฐ€ ๋ณผ๊นŒ์š”?
๐Ÿ–‹ Editor's Note
์˜ค๋Š˜ ์ค€๋น„ํ•œ ๋น„ํƒ€๋ฏผ์€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€.
๋งค์ฃผ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ์˜์–ด ์ปจํ…์ธ ์™€ ๊ณต๋ถ€๋ฒ•์„ ๋ชจ์•„์„œ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋“œ๋ ค์š”.
ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์€ ์–ธ์ œ๋“  ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋‹ต์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ์•Œ๋ ค์ฃผ์„ธ์š”
์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์†Œ์ค‘ํ•œ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :)

๐Ÿ’™์ด ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค
๐Ÿ’ซํ† ๊ธฐ ๐Ÿ’‹Sarah ๐Ÿ’งYuha ๐ŸŒŸLucia

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