#๋งˆ์ผ€ํ„ฐ #์—…๋ฌด์ƒ์†Œํ†ต #๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค #์‹ค์ „์˜์–ด

๋” ์ง€์ ์ธ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์œ„ํ•œ ๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ
by. ์ฑ„ํŒ…์˜์–ด ํ…”๋ผ

> Today's Dose : [๋งˆ์ผ€ํ„ฐ์˜ ์˜์–ด]
  1. [์˜ค๋Š˜์˜ ํ‘œํ˜„] ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ๋ณด๊ณ , ์˜์–ด๋กœ ํ•ด๋ณด์ž
  2. [์งค๋กœ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ์˜์–ด] ๋งˆ์ผ€ํ„ฐ ๊ณต๊ฐ ์งค English ver.
  3. [์˜ค๋Š˜์˜ ๊ฟ€ํŒ] Stop Apologizing! ๋‹น๋‹นํžˆ ์˜์–ด ํ•˜๊ธฐ
  4. [๋ณต์Šต] ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ
๐Ÿ‘ฉ๐Ÿปโ€๐Ÿ’ป ACoS, CTR, AARRR... ์ด๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค ๋ฌด์Šจ ๋ง์ด์•ผ?!

๋งˆ์ผ€ํ„ฐ๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋”๋ผ๋„ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ…์„ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ์‹œ๋Œ€๊ฐ€ ์™”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํผ์Šค๋„ ๋ธŒ๋žœ๋”ฉ์ด๋‚˜ ๋‚ด ์ œํ’ˆ ํ™๋ณด๋„ ํ•„์š”ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์ง์žฅ์ƒํ™œ์„ ํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ์ˆ˜๋งŽ์€ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํ„ฐ์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์†Œํ†ต์„ ํ•˜๊ณ , ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์„ฑ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋…ผ์˜ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค์™€ ๋–ผ๋ ค์•ผ ๋—„ ์ˆ˜ ์—†๋Š” ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ…, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆ์ผ€์ด์…˜ ์Šคํ‚ฌ์€ ์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์‹ ๊ฐ€์š”?


์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆ์ผ€์ด์…˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์•Œ๋ ค ๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š”. ๋งˆ์ผ€ํ„ฐ์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ๊ณต๊ฐ๋˜๊ณ , ๋งˆ์ผ€ํ„ฐ๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹Œ ์ด์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋ฐฐ์›€์ด ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฐ”๋ผ์š”.


  ๐Ÿ“Š ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ๋ณด๊ณ , ์˜์–ด๋กœ ํ•ด๋ณด์ž
โ“ Question: ๋Œ€ํ™”์˜ ๋ฌผ๊ผฌ๋ฅผ ํ„ฐ ๋ด…์‹œ๋‹ค.

Could you give me an update on what the marketing team has been doing?

์ตœ๊ทผ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ…ํŒ€์ด ์–ด๋–ค ์ผ๋“ค์„ ํ–ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์—…๋ฐ์ดํŠธํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?

*์ง€๋‚œ์ฃผ์— ๋ฐฐ์šด fill in๋„ ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜๋ฏธ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. Could you fill me in on A?


Can you share what was on the agenda for the marketing team last month?

์ด๋ฒˆ ๋‹ฌ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ…ํŒ€์˜ ์•„์  ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ด์—ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?


Could you share your performance stats for this month?

์ด๋ฒˆ ๋‹ฌ ๋‹น์‹ ์˜ ์„ฑ๊ณผ ์ˆ˜์น˜๋ฅผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?

๐Ÿ’ฌ Answer: ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋‹ตํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

conduct: ์ดํ–‰ํ•˜๋‹ค, ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋‹ค

We conducted the following marketing activities/projects this month:

์ด๋ฒˆ ๋‹ฌ์—๋Š” ๋‹ค์Œ๊ณผ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์ž‘์—…/ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

*์ง€๋‚œ์ฃผ์— ๋ฐฐ์šด 'carry out'๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

*์ฝœ๋ก (:) ํ›„์—๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค ์ž‘์—…์„ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜์˜€๋Š”์ง€ ๋‚˜์—ดํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


allocate: ํ• ๋‹นํ•˜๋‹ค
We allocated $$ amount of money to this channel.

์ด ์ฑ„๋„์—๋Š” $$๋งŒํผ์˜ ๊ธˆ์•ก์„ ํ• ๋‹นํ•˜์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


display: ๋ณด์ด๋‹ค

It is displaying an upward/downward trend in growth.

์„ฑ์žฅ์ด ์ƒ์Šน์„ธ/ํ•˜๋ฝ์„ธ๋ฅผ ๋ณด์ด๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

*์œ ์šฉํ•œ ๋™์˜์–ด:

- The campaign is showing an upward/downward trend in growth.

- The campaign is experiencing an upward/downward trend in growth.


improve/worsen: ๊ฐœ์„ ๋˜๋‹ค/์•…ํ™”ํ•˜๋‹ค

The conversion rate improved/worsened.

์ „ํ™˜์œจ์ด ๊ฐœ์„ /์•…ํ™”๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

*Improve/worsen์€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์„ฑ๊ณผ์ง€ํ‘œ์—๋„ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

ex. The performance improved/worsened.

ex. The CTR improved/worsened.


increase/decrease: ์ƒ์Šน(์„ฑ์žฅ)/๊ฐ์†Œํ•˜๋‹ค

The exposure/reach/acquisition increased/decreased.

๋…ธ์ถœ/๋„๋‹ฌ/์œ ์ € ํš๋“๋Ÿ‰์ด ์ƒ์Šน/๊ฐ์†Œํ•˜์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

*improve/worsen์€ ์ƒํƒœ๊ฐ€ ์ข‹๊ณ  ๋‚˜์จ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋งํ•  ๋•Œ, increase/decrease๋Š” ์–‘ ์ฆ๊ฐ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋งํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ผ์š”.


๐Ÿ’กTella Marketer's Tip

์ค„์ž„๋ง ์•Œ์•„๋‘๊ธฐ: ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์šฉ์–ด๋Š” ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆ์ผ€์ด์…˜์—์„œ๋„ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•„์š”. ๊ฐ ๋‹จ์–ด์˜ ๋จธ๋ฆฌ๊ธ€์ž๋ฅผ ๋”ฐ์„œ ์ค„์ž„๋ง์„ ๋งŒ๋“œ๋Š” acronym์„ ์ž์ฃผ ์“ฐ์ฃ . ROI, CTR, CPC, ACoS, ROAS ๋“ฑ์ด ๋Œ€ํ‘œ์ ์ธ ์˜ˆ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ฐ„ํ˜น return on investment, click-through rate ๋“ฑ ์ค„์ž„๋ง์„ ํ’€์–ด์„œ ๋Œ€ํ™”์— ์“ฐ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์–ด๋–ค ๋‹จ์–ด์˜ ์ค„์ž„๋ง์ธ์ง€ ์•Œ์•„ ๋‘˜ ํ•„์š”๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๐Ÿ’ฌ Conversation
A: Alice, can you share what was on the agenda for the marketing team last month?

์•จ๋ฆฌ์Šค, ์ด๋ฒˆ ๋‹ฌ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ…ํŒ€์˜ ์•„์  ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ด์—ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?


B: Yes, of course. We conducted a customer analysis and a new Facebook marketing campaign.

๋ฌผ๋ก ์ด์ฃ . ์ €ํฌ๋Š” ๊ณ ๊ฐ ๋ถ„์„๊ณผ ์‹ ๊ทœ ํŽ˜์ด์Šค๋ถ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์บ ํŽ˜์ธ์„ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


We allocated a bigger budget to Facebook to help with machine learning.

์ดˆ๊ธฐ ๋จธ์‹ ๋Ÿฌ๋‹์„ ๋•๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ ํŽ˜์ด์Šค๋ถ์— ๋” ๋งŽ์€ ๋ฒ„์ ฏ์„ ํ• ๋‹นํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


A: Has our conversion rate improved since we started the new campaign?

์‹ ๊ทœ ์บ ํŽ˜์ธ ์‹œ์ž‘ ์ดํ›„ ์ „ํ™˜์œจ์ด ๊ฐœ์„ ๋˜์—ˆ๋‚˜์š”?


B: Yes. The CTR and ROI increased while the ACoS decreased.

๋„ค. ์ „ํ™˜์œจ๊ณผ ํˆฌ์ž ๋Œ€๋น„ ์ˆ˜์ต์ด ์ƒ์Šนํ•˜์˜€๊ณ  ์ˆ˜์ต ๋Œ€๋น„ ๊ด‘๊ณ  ์ง€์ถœ์€ ๊ฐ์†Œํ•˜์˜€์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


And we are continuing to display an upward trend in growth.

๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์„ฑ์žฅ๋ฅ ์ด ์ง€์†ํ•ด์„œ ์ƒ์Šน๊ณก์„ ์„ ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๐Ÿ† Challenge!

์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์บ ํŽ˜์ธ์€ ์–ด๋–ค๊ฐ€์š”? ์„ฑ๊ณผ๊ฐ€ ๊ฐœ์„ ๋˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?
์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋ฐฐ์šด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ์ž‘๋ฌธํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

 ๐Ÿ˜‚ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํ„ฐ ๊ณต๊ฐ ์งค English ver.
์˜ค๋žœ๋งŒ์— ๋Œ์•„์™”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์งค(meme)๋กœ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ์˜์–ด๊ณต๋ถ€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„!
์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ํ…”๋ผ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํ„ฐ์ธ Sarah๊ฐ€ ์‹ค์ œ ํŒ”๋กœ์ž‰ ์ค‘์ธ ์ธ์Šคํƒ€๊ทธ๋žจ ๊ณ„์ • The Incumbent Agency (@theincumbentagency)์—์„œ ๊ณต๊ฐ๊ฐ€๋Š” ์งค๋“ค์„ ๊ฐ€์ ธ์™”์–ด์š”. ์›๋ž˜๋Š” ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ์—์ด์ „์‹œ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๊ณต์œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ณ„์ •์ด์ง€๋งŒ ์ง์žฅ์ธ์ด๋‚˜ ํ”„๋ฆฌ๋žœ์„œ ๋“ฑ ํด๋ผ์ด์–ธํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ƒ๋Œ€ํ•  ์ผ์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด๋ผ๋ฉด ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ๋“  ๊ณต๊ฐํ•˜์‹ค ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. 
๋œป:
์ด๋ฏธ ํ•  ์ผ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์€๋ฐ ์–ด์นด์šดํŠธ ๋งค๋‹ˆ์ €(ํ•ด๋‹น ํด๋ผ์ด์–ธํŠธ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ž)๊ฐ€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ผ์„ ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๋” ๋ผ์›Œ ๋„ฃ์œผ๋ ค ํ•  ๋•Œ.

My plate is completely full.: ๋‚˜ ์ง„์งœ ๋ฐ”๋น .
ํ•  ์ผ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์•„์„œ ๋” ์ด์ƒ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ผ์„ ๋ฐ›์„ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด๋‚˜ ์—๋„ˆ์ง€๊ฐ€ ์—†์„ ๋•Œ๋ฅผ ๋งํ•ด์š”. ๊ธฐ์—…์— ๋”ฐ๋ผ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์“ฐ๋Š”๋ฐ '์บํŒŒ'(capacity) '๋ฆฌ์†Œ์Šค' ๋˜๋Š” 'ํ’ˆ'์ด ์—†๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•˜์ฃ ? ๋‚ด ์—ญ๋Ÿ‰ ์ด์ƒ์œผ๋กœ ๋„˜์น˜๋„๋ก ์ผ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜์„ ๋•Œ ์ด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์—์„œ๋Š” ๋ง ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ์ ‘์‹œ, 'plate'๊ฐ€ ๋„˜์น˜๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋„ค์š”.
๋œป:
์ตœ์ข…๋ณธ ์ปจํŽŒํ•ด ๋‹ค ๋ณด๋ƒˆ๋Š”๋ฐ ์ˆ˜์ • ์š”์ฒญ๊ณผ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๋Œ์•„์˜จ ํด๋ผ์ด์–ธํŠธ
'๋‚˜ ๋Œ์•„์™”์–ด์–ด์–ด์–ด!'

Deliverables: ์ „๋‹ฌ ์‚ฌํ•ญ, ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ
์ž‘์—… ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฌผ์„ deliverables๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ง ๊ทธ๋Œ€๋กœ ํด๋ผ์ด์–ธํŠธ์—๊ฒŒ deliver, ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด๋ž€ ๋œป์ด์—์š”. Final deliverables๋Š” '์ตœ์ข…๋ณธ'์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
*์ดˆ์•ˆ์€ first draft๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


๐Ÿ† Challenge!

์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋ฐฐ์šด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ํ•˜๋‚˜ ๊ณจ๋ผ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

ํŠน๋ณ„ํžˆ ๋งˆ์Œ์— ๋“ค์—ˆ๋˜ ์งค์ด ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”? ์™œ ๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‚˜์š”?

The Incumbent Agency ๊ณ„์ •์„ ๋ฐฉ๋ฌธํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
๋œป์„ ์•Œ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€ ํ‘œํ˜„์ด ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?

 ๐Ÿ™…๐Ÿปโ€โ™€๏ธ Stop Apologizing! ๋‹น๋‹นํžˆ ์˜์–ดํ•˜๊ธฐ
์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์˜์–ด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋งŒํผ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ์ด์•ผ๊ธธ ํ•ด ๋ณผ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋Œ€ํ•˜๋Š” ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ [์• ํ‹ฐํŠœ๋“œ]์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋จธ๋ฆฟ์†์— ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ๋Š” ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด ๋‚˜๋Š”๋ฐ ๋„์ €ํžˆ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ฐฉ์ฐฉ ๋ณ€ํ™˜์ด ์•ˆ ๋˜๋Š” ๋‚˜์˜ ๋ชจ์Šต์—, ๊ทธ๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์˜ค๋ž˜ ์˜์–ด ๊ณต๋ถ€๋ฅผ ํ–ˆ์œผ๋ฉด์„œ ํ•ญ์ƒ ์ œ์ž๋ฆฌ์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์€ ๋‚˜์˜ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์— ์ž์‹ ๊ฐ์ด ๋–จ์–ด์ ธ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋‘๋ ต๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋А๊ปด์ง„ ์  ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”? ๋‚ด ๋ง˜์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์•ˆ ๋‚˜์˜ค๋Š” ๋А๋ฆฐ ์˜์–ด์—, ๊ณ„์†๋˜๋Š” 'um...' ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋‹ต๋‹ตํ•˜๋‹ค ๋А๊ผˆ๋˜ ์  ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”? ํ˜น์‹œ... ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋‚  ์–‘ํ•ดํ•ด ๋‹ฌ๋ผ๋ฉฐ ์‚ฌ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ํ•ด ๋ณธ ์ ์ด ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?
์ „ ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”. ์™ ์ง€ ๋‚˜๋ž‘ ๋Œ€ํ™”ํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚ด ๋ถ€์กฑํ•œ ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋‚ญ๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์—‰๋šฑํ•œ ๋ง์„ ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋น„์›ƒ์„ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๊ณ , ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์˜ ์•ž์—๋งŒ ์„œ๋ฉด ์‹ฌ์žฅ์ด ์ฒ ๋ . ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋‚ด๋ ค์•‰์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๋Ÿด ๋•Œ ์ €ํฌ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์ด ์“ฐ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์ด๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”.

'I'm sorry for my English.'
ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„, ์‚ฌ๊ณผํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”.

์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ทธ ๋ˆ„๊ตฌ์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ์˜ ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๋ฏธ์•ˆํ•ดํ•  ํ•„์š”๊ฐ€ ์—†์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ์ € ์†Œํ†ต์˜ ์ผ๋ถ€๋ถ„์ผ ๋ฟ์ด๊ณ  ์™ธ๊ตญ์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์—๊ฒ ๋‹น์—ฐํ•œ ์ ˆ์ฐจ์˜ˆ์š”.

์ œ๊ฐ€ ์‚ฌ๊ณผํ•˜๋ฉด ์นœ๊ตฌ๋“ค์ด ํ•ญ์ƒ ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ง์ด ์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ์š”, 'Oh my gosh don't be sorry! I can't speak Korean nearly as well as you do.'(์˜ค๋งˆ์ด๊ฐ“ ๋ฏธ์•ˆํ•ดํ•  ํ•„์š” ์—†์–ด! ๋‚˜๋Š” ๋„ค ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐˆ ์—„๋‘๋„ ๋ชป ๋‚ด๋Š”๋ฐ ๋ญ!) ๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ด์˜ˆ์š”. ์ €๋Š” ์ด ๋ง์ด ์œ„๋กœ๋˜๋”๋ผ๊ณ ์š”. '๋„ˆ๋„ ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด ๋ชปํ•˜๋Š”๋ฐ ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์˜์–ด ์ด ์ •๋„ ํ•˜๋ฉด ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํžˆ ์ž˜ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์ง€ ๋ญ!'ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋ฉด ์šฉ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์š”.

Remember, we don't need anyone's approval.
๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋‚จ์˜ ์ธ์ •์ด ํ•„์š” ์—†๋‹ค๋Š” ์‚ฌ์‹ค์„.

It doesn't matter what people think about how you speak English.
๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋“ , ์ „ํ˜€ ์ƒ๊ด€์—†์–ด์š”.

๊ทธ๋ž˜๋„ ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ์—๊ฒŒ ์–‘ํ•ด๋ฅผ ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด? ์ด ๐Ÿช„magic spell๋“ค์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฑด ์–ด๋•Œ์š”?

[๊ณ ๋งˆ์›€ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•˜๊ธฐ]

Thank you for being so patient. ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ ค ์ฃผ์…”์„œ ๊ฐ์‚ฌํ•ด์š”.

Thanks for your patience. ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ ค ์ค˜์„œ ๊ณ ๋งˆ์›Œ.


[์กฐํฌํ•˜๊ธฐ]
Haha, one sec. Please bear with me here. ํ•˜ํ•˜ ์ž ๊น๋งŒ์š”. ์กฐ๊ธˆ๋งŒ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ ค์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.
Whoo! That was more difficult than I thought! ์•„์ด๊ตฌ! ์ƒ๊ฐ๋ณด๋‹ค ์ข€ ๋งํ•˜๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ค์› ๋„ค์š”...!


[์–‘ํ•ด ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ธฐ]

Um, let me take a second to gather my thoughts. ์Œ, ์ƒ๊ฐํ•  ์‹œ๊ฐ„ 1์ดˆ๋งŒ ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.

Wait. Let me start over. ์ž ๊น๋งŒ์š”. ๋‹ค์‹œ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ• ๊ฒŒ์š”.

In other words, ๋‹ค์‹œ ๋งํ•˜์ž๋ฉด์š”,


๐Ÿ† Challenge!

๊ธฐ์กด์— ๋‚˜์˜ ๋А๋ฆฐ ์˜์–ด ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์‚ฌ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ํ•ด๋ณธ ์ ์ด ์žˆ๋‚˜์š”?
์•ž์œผ๋กœ๋Š” ์‚ฌ๊ณผํ•˜๋Š” ๋Œ€์‹  ์–ด๋–ค ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ์“ฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์€์ง€ ๊ณต์œ ํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š”.

 ๐Ÿ’ก ์ง€๋‚œ ์ฃผ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ
๐Ÿ’ฌ Last Week's Feedback
For [Joo]
I need to make up for that I cut the new dress which is hanging in the shop.
>>> I need to make up for that *new dress I cut which is hanging in the shop.

Any who belong to marketing team is come up package designs are too fancy.
>>> *Anyone who *belongs to *the marketing team *that came up with *these package designs *(needs to do something) *because they are too fancy.

Q. fancy๊ฐ€ ํ™”๋ คํ•˜๋‹ค, ๊ณ ๊ธ‰์Šค๋Ÿฝ๋‹ค ๋“ฑ์˜ ๋œป์ด ์žˆ๋Š”๊ฑฐ ๊ฐ™์€๋ฐ ๋ถ€์ •์ ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด๋„ ๋˜๋‚˜์š”?
>>> ๋„ค! ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹  ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์•ž์— too๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด '๋„ˆ๋ฌด ํ™”๋ คํ•˜๋‹ค'๋ผ๋Š” ๋œป์œผ๋กœ ์“ฐ์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ์š”, '๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ณผํ•˜๋‹ค'๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์œผ๋กœ๋Š” 'too much'๋ผ๊ณ ๋„ ๋งŽ์ด ์”๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. 
Great job, Joo! I looove that you gave it your best. Keep up the great work!
- ์ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ๋ชฉ์ ์–ด๊ฐ€ 'new dress', ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ด๋ฅผ ์ˆ˜์‹ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด 'I cut'์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ˆœ์„œ๊ฐ€ ๋ฐ”๋€Œ์–ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
- Anyone์€ ๋‹จ์ˆ˜์ด๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋™์‚ฌ๋„ ๋‹จ์ˆ˜๋กœ ๋งž์ถฐ์ฃผ์…”์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
- ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๋‚ด์—์„œ 'Anyone who belongs to the marketing team'๊ณผ 'package designs are too fancy' ๊ฐ„์˜ ๊ด€๋ จ์„ฑ์„ ์ฐพ์ง€ ๋ชปํ–ˆ์–ด์š”ใ…  ๋””์ž์ธ์ด ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๊ณผํ•˜์—ฌ ์ƒˆ๋กœ ๋””์ž์ธ์„ ๊ณ ์•ˆํ•ด์•ผ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ๊ด„ํ˜ธ์—์„œ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ needs to do something(์กฐ์น˜๋ฅผ ์ทจํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค) ๋˜๋Š” needs to come up with a new design(์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋””์ž์ธ์„ ๊ณ ์•ˆํ•ด๋‚ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค)์ด๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜์‹œ๋ฉด ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
For [Mimi]
I just tried to make a paragraph using almost phrases in today's lesson.
>>> I just tried to make a paragraph using almost *all of the phrases *from today's lesson.

I am here, filing my boss, Mrs. Lee in. Sheโ€™s in a sudden important meeting. She asked me to focus on how to find out the solution to generate profit for the coming 3rd quarter.
>>> She asked me to focus on *finding out the solution to generate profit for the *upcoming 3rd quarter.

Above all, is there anyone who belongs to the marketing team or is in charge of that area breaking out the profits of last quarters?
>>> Above all, is there anyone who belongs to the marketing team or is in charge of that area breaking *down the profits of *the last quarter?

Looking back on that data, I think we could lay out the options and carry out them. Anyway, we have to make up for this agenda and make up to Mrs. Lee.
>>> Looking back on that data, I think we could lay out the options and *carry them out.
Great job, Mimi! Love your work :)

Here's my feedback:
- '์˜ค๋Š˜ ๋ ˆ์Šจ์—์„œ ๋ฐฐ์šด' ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•˜์‹ค ๋•Œ์—๋Š” in๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” from์ด ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์›Œ์š”!
- '๋งค์ถœ์„ ์˜ฌ๋ฆด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ฐพ์„์ง€'๋ณด๋‹ค๋Š” '๋งค์ถœ์„ ์˜ฌ๋ฆด ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์„ ์ฐพ๋Š”๋ฐ' ์ง‘์ค‘ํ•˜๋ผ๋Š” ์š”์ฒญ์„ ๋ฐ›์•˜๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ๋” ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
- break out์€ ์ฃผ๋กœ ํ”ผ๋ถ€์— ์—ฌ๋“œ๋ฆ„์ด ๋‚˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์ „์—ผ๋ณ‘์ด ๋„๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ์— ์“ฐ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. '๋ถ„์„ํ•˜๋‹ค, ์ž˜๊ฒŒ ์ชผ๊ฐœ๋‹ค'๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์€ break down ;)
- Make up for this agenda๋Š” ๋ฌธ๋ฒ•์ ์œผ๋กœ ํ‹€๋ฆฐ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์€ ์•„๋‹ˆ์ง€๋งŒ '์•„์  ๋‹ค'๋ฅผ ๋งŒํšŒํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์€ ์ž˜ ์“ฐ์ง€ ์•Š์•„์š”. ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค Make up for our shortcomings(์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋ถ€์กฑํ–ˆ๋˜ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๋งŒํšŒํ•˜๋‹ค) make up for our mistakes(์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์‹ค์ˆ˜ํ•œ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์„ ๋งŒํšŒํ•˜๋‹ค)๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜์‹œ๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ๋” ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฌ์šธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!

For [Alice]
I'm in charge of Android UI Developing in this project.
>>> I'm in charge of Android UI *development in this project.
Or:
>>> I'm in charge of *(product name)'s Android UI development.

How cool! Great sentence, Alice :)

Here's my feedback:
- develop์˜ ๋ช…์‚ฌํ˜•์€ development์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค
- '์ด ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ'๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ ์ฒญ์ž์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ๊ทธ ๋Œ€์ƒ์ด ๋ชจํ˜ธํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ๋Œ€์‹ ์— ๊ฐœ๋ฐœ ์ค‘์ด์‹  ์ œํ’ˆ ์ด๋ฆ„์„ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐํ•ด ์ฃผ๋Š” ๋“ฑ ๋ฌด์—‡์„ ๊ฐœ๋ฐœํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๋ง์”€ํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
Q. ์ž์‹ ์˜ ๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด์„œ ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์˜ˆ๋ฌธ์ด๋‚˜ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”?
์ด๋Ÿฐ ํ‘œํ˜„์€ ์–ด๋•Œ์š”?

I have (number) years of (field) experience.
์ €๋Š” (๋ถ„์•ผ)์—์„œ (๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ) ๋…„์˜ ๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ex. I have ten years of marketing experience.
์ €๋Š” 10๋…„์˜ ๋งˆ์ผ€ํŒ… ๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

I've been working in (field) for (number) years.
์ €๋Š” (๋ถ„์•ผ)์—์„œ (๊ฒฝ๋ ฅ) ๋…„ ๋™์•ˆ ์ผํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

ex. I've been working in English education for 20 years.
์ €๋Š” ์˜์–ด ๊ต์œก ๋ถ„์•ผ์—์„œ 20๋…„๊ฐ„ ์ผํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„๋„ ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•˜์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”!
๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ์ฝ๊ณ  ๊ฐ ์„น์…˜๋ณ„ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์„ ํ•ด ์ฃผ์‹œ๋ฉด ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํŠœํ„ฐ๊ฐ€ ๊ทธ์ค‘ ๋ช‡ ๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ๊ณจ๋ผ ์ฒจ์‚ญ์„ ํ•ด ๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐฐ์šด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ '๋‚ด ๊ฒƒ'์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ง์ ‘ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•ด ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ํ•„์ˆ˜์ธ ๊ฒƒ ์•„์‹œ์ฃ ? ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๋˜์‹ ๋‹ค๋ฉด ๊ผญ ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•ด ์ฃผ์„ธ์š” :)


์ธ์Šคํƒ€๋กœ ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๊ธฐ

์ •๊ธฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ธ์Šคํƒ€๊ทธ๋žจ์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ๋ฐ›๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”.


๋‰ด์Šค๋ ˆํ„ฐ์—์„œ ๋‹ค๋ฃฌ ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์ง์ ‘ ์จ ๋ณด์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ๋Œ“๊ธ€์ด๋‚˜ ์Šคํ† ๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํ†ตํ•ด ์ž‘๋ฌธ ์—ฐ์Šต์„ ๋„์™€๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์—๊ฒŒ ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์„ ๋ฐ›์•„ ๋ณด์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ธฐํšŒ์ด๋‹ˆ ์ ๊ทน์ ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด ๋ณด์‹œ๊ธธ ๊ถŒ์žฅ๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š” :)


์ด์ œ, ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ '์Šต๊ด€'์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.

์นดํ†ก์˜์–ด ํ…”๋ผ์™€ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ๋ถ€๋‹ด์—†์ด, ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๊พธ์ค€ํ•˜๊ฒŒ.
์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ๋ฃจํ‹ด์œผ๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด ๋ณด์‹œ๋Š” ๊ฑด ์–ด๋–จ๊นŒ์š”?
๐Ÿ–‹ Editor's Note
์˜ค๋Š˜ ์ค€๋น„ํ•œ ๋น„ํƒ€๋ฏผ์€ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€.
๋งค์ฃผ ์œ ์šฉํ•œ ์˜์–ด ์ปจํ…์ธ ์™€ ๊ณต๋ถ€๋ฒ•์„ ๋ชจ์•„์„œ ๋ณด๋‚ด๋“œ๋ ค์š”.
ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ์€ ์–ธ์ œ๋“  ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ ๋‹ต์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ์•Œ๋ ค์ฃผ์„ธ์š”
์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์†Œ์ค‘ํ•œ ์˜๊ฒฌ์„ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค :)

๐Ÿ’™์ด ๋ ˆํ„ฐ๋ฅผ ๋งŒ๋“  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค
๐Ÿ’ซํ† ๊ธฐ ๐Ÿ’‹Sarah ๐Ÿ’งYuha ๐ŸŒŸLucia

[Product Designer ์ฑ„์šฉ ์ค‘]
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ํ…”๋ผ์˜ ์‹ฌ๋ฆฌ์Šคํ•œ ๊ณ ๊ฐ ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ํ•จ๊ป˜ ์„ค๊ณ„ํ•ด์ฃผ์‹ค
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