์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋ฐ์ผ๋ฆฌ๋Ÿฌ๋„ˆ! ๋Ÿฌ๋„ˆ๋ธ” ๋งค๋‹ˆ์ € ๋ฆฐ์ง€์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


์ง€๋‚œ ํ† ์š”์ผ, 1๊ธฐ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ 16๊ธฐ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ถ€ํŠธ์บ ํ”„ ์™„์ฃผ์ƒ๋ถ„๋“ค๊ณผ ์˜ค๋žœ๋งŒ์— ๋ชจ์˜€์–ด์š”๐Ÿ”ฅ


์™„์ฃผ ํ›„์—๋„ ์ปค๋ฎค๋‹ˆํ‹ฐ์—์„œ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ด์–ด์˜ค๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”๋ฐ์š”. ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ฅผ ๋“ฃ๋‹ค๊ฐ€ ๋†€๋ž์–ด์š”. ์˜์–ด์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๊ณ ๋ฏผ ์ž์ฒด๊ฐ€ ๋‹ฌ๋ผ์ ธ ์žˆ์—ˆ๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”.


โœ… ํ•ด์™ธ ๊ฐ„ํ˜ธ์‚ฌ๋ฅผ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„
โœ… ์˜์–ด๋กœ ํšŒ์‚ฌ ์—…๋ฌด๋ฅผ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„

โœ… ์ด์ง์„ ์œ„ํ•ด ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋งŒ๋“  ํฌํŠธํด๋ฆฌ์˜ค๋ฅผ ์œ ํŠœ๋ธŒ์— ์˜ฌ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋ถ„
โœ… ์˜์–ด ๊ด€๋ จ ์ง์ข…์œผ๋กœ ์ปค๋ฆฌ์–ด ์ „ํ™˜์„ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„


๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ์ด๋ถ„๋“ค๋„ ์ฒ˜์Œ์—๋Š” ๋‹˜๊ณผ ๋˜‘๊ฐ™์•˜์–ด์š”.

"์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๊พธ์ค€ํžˆ ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์–ด๋ ค์›Œ์š”."
"์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ๋Š˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์–ด์š”."


์ง€๊ธˆ์€ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ณ ๋ฏผ ๋Œ€์‹  "์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋‚ด ์ปค๋ฆฌ์–ด์™€ ์ผ์ƒ์— ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ™œ์šฉํ• ๊นŒ?" ๋ฅผ ๊ณ ๋ฏผํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ์ด์ œ๋Š” ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋” ํฐ ๋ชฉํ‘œ๋ฅผ ์ด๋ฃจ๋ ค๊ณ  ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”.


๋‹˜๋„ ๊ผญ ๊ทธ ๋‹จ๊ณ„๊นŒ์ง€ ๊ฐ”์œผ๋ฉด ์ข‹๊ฒ ์–ด์š”๐Ÿ˜Ž ๊ทธ ์‹œ์ž‘์€ ๊ฑฐ์ฐฝํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•„์š”. ์˜ค๋Š˜ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ ์ ‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ ์˜ค๋Š˜๋„ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์ฝ์–ด์ฃผ์„ธ์š” :)


1. '๊ฐœ ๋’ค์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์•ˆ ํ•˜์…จ๋„ค์š”.'๋ฅผ ์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ ๋กœ ๋งํ•˜๋ฉด?

โ“ ์˜ค๋Š˜์˜ ์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ  ํ€ด์ฆˆ


์‚ฐ์ฑ… ์ค‘์— ๊ธธ๊ฐ€์— ๋ฐฉ๊ธˆ ์ „ ๊ฐ•์•„์ง€๊ฐ€ ๋†“๊ณ  ๊ฐ„ ํ”์ ์„ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ˆˆ์น˜๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋ฉฐ ์ฃผ์ธ์„ ํ–ฅํ•ด ๋งํ–ˆ์–ด์š”. "๊ฐœ ๋’ค์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์•ˆ ํ•˜์…จ๋„ค์š”."


์ด ๋ง, ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ• ๊นŒ์š”?
๐Ÿ‘‰ ___________________________________________.

You didn't clean up after your dog.

๊ฐœ ๋’ค์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ์•ˆ ํ•˜์…จ๋„ค์š”.

1๏ธโƒฃ Teacher Joe's Tip

์˜์–ด๊ถŒ ๋‚˜๋ผ์— ๊ฐ€๋ฉด ๊ณต์›์ด๋‚˜ ๊ฑฐ๋ฆฌ์—์„œ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋ฌธ๊ตฌ๋ฅผ ์ž์ฃผ ๋ด…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. โ€œClean up after your pet.โ€ ์ €๋„ ์ฒ˜์Œ์—” ๋ฌด์Šจ ๋ง์ธ์ง€ ํ—ท๊ฐˆ๋ ธ๋Š”๋ฐ, ์ฃผ๋ณ€์— ๋ฐ˜๋ ค๊ฒฌ๊ณผ ๋ณดํ˜ธ์ž๋“ค์„ ๋ณด๊ณ  ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๋ˆˆ์น˜์ฑ˜์–ด์š”. โ€˜๊ฐœ๊ฐ€ ์‹ธ๋†“์€ ๊ฑธ ์น˜์šฐ์„ธ์š”โ€™, ์ฆ‰ ๋’ค์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•˜๋ผ๋Š” ๋œป์ด๋”๋ผ๊ณ ์š”. ์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ ํ•ต์‹ฌ์€ clean up after๋ผ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‹จ์ˆœํžˆ โ€˜์ฒญ์†Œํ•˜๋‹คโ€™๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ, ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ์–ด์งˆ๋Ÿฌ ๋†“์€ ๊ฑธ ๋Œ€์‹  ์น˜์›Œ์ฃผ๋Š” ์ƒํ™ฉ์— ์“ฐ๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ด์—์š”. 


์—ฌ๊ธฐ์„œ after๋Š” โ€˜~ํ•œ ๋’ค์—โ€™๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ, โ€˜๊ทธ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์ด ์–ด์งˆ๋Ÿฌ ๋†“์€ ๊ฑธ ์น˜์šด๋‹คโ€™๋Š” ๊ฐœ๋…์ด์—์š”. ์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ ๋กœ ๋ณด๋ฉด, ๋ˆ„๊ตฐ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ๋‚จ๊ธด ํ”์ ์„ ๋”ฐ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋ฉฐ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•ด ์ฃผ๋Š” ๋А๋‚Œ์ด์ฃ . ๋ถ€๋ชจ์™€ ์ž๋…€ ์‚ฌ์ด, ๋ฃธ๋ฉ”์ดํŠธ ๊ฐ„, ํšŒ์‚ฌ์—์„œ๋„ ์ž์ฃผ ์“ฐ์ด๋Š” ์‹ค์šฉ์ ์ธ ํ‘œํ˜„์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. clean up๋งŒ ์•„๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ clean up after๊นŒ์ง€ ์•„๋Š” ๊ฑด ํฐ ์ฐจ์ด์˜ˆ์š”. ์ด์ œ ์ด ํ‘œํ˜„๋„ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ํ‘œํ˜„ ๋ฆฌ์ŠคํŠธ์— ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”!


2๏ธโƒฃ Think in English

 The phrase โ€œclean up afterโ€ means to tidy a mess made by you or someone else. People often say this when talking about picking up dog poop or putting away toys. It sounds polite and less direct than naming the exact mess.


3๏ธโƒฃ ์งง์€ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์œผ๋กœ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ

ex1) I had to clean up after my kids because they made me breakfast.

์•„์ด๋“ค์ด ์•„์นจ์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ค˜์„œ, ๋’ท์ •๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋๋‹ค.


ex2) The janitor has to clean up after the students as soon as they leave. 

ํ•™์ƒ๋“ค์ด ๋‚˜๊ฐ€๋ฉด ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๊ด€๋ฆฌ์ธ์ด ๋’ท์ •๋ฆฌ๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค.


4๏ธโƒฃ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋กœ ๋ฐ˜๋ณตํ•˜๊ธฐ

A: Do we need to clean up after ourselves before we leave the airbnb?

B: Yes, you do, but you only need to take out your trash. 

A: ์—์–ด๋น„์•ค๋น„ ๋‚˜๊ฐ€๊ธฐ ์ „์— ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋’ท์ •๋ฆฌํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ด?

B: ์‘, ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ด. ๊ทผ๋ฐ ์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐ๋งŒ ๋ฒ„๋ฆฌ๋ฉด ๋ผ.

2. ์Šค๋ชฐํ† ํฌ, ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์–ด์š”.

<์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ  ๋ถ€ํŠธ์บ ํ”„>์—์„œ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ๊ณ ๋ฏผ์ด ์ƒ๊ธธ ๋•Œ๋งˆ๋‹ค ํ˜ผ์ž ๋™๋™ ์•“์ง€ ์•Š์•„๋„ ๋ผ์š”. ๋งค๋‹ฌ ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ ์ง์ ‘ ๋ฌผ์–ด๋ณผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”.


์ด๋ฒˆ ๋‹ฌ๋„ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ–ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ์š”. ๋†€๋ผ์šด ๊ฑด, ๋‹˜๋„ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์ฏค์€ ํ–ˆ๋˜ ๊ณ ๋ฏผ์ผ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”๐Ÿฅน


โœ… ์™ธ๊ตญ์ธ ๋™๋ฃŒ์™€ ์Šค๋ชฐํ† ํฌ, ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์–ด์š”.
โœ… ์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ๋Š˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฑด์ง€ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”?
โœ… ๋‹จ์–ด๋Š” ๋‹ค ์•„๋Š”๋ฐ, ์™œ ๋“ค์„ ๋•Œ ์ดํ•ด๊ฐ€ ์•ˆ ๋˜๋‚˜์š”?


์ง€๊ธˆ ์ด ๊ณ ๋ฏผ ์ค‘ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋ผ๋„ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์ฝ์–ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”๐Ÿ‘‡

Q1. ์Šค๋ชฐํ† ํฌ, ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋ฅด๊ฒ ์–ด์š”.

โ€ผ๏ธํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜์กฐ์˜ ๋‹ต๋ณ€


์จ๋จน์„ ์งˆ๋ฌธ 5~10๊ฐœ๋ฅผ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

์™ธ๊ตญ์ธ ๋™๋ฃŒ์™€ ์˜์–ด๊ถŒ ์นœ๊ตฌ๋“ค๊ณผ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์–ด์šธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์‹ถ์–ดํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์Šค๋ชฐํ† ํฌ๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋ ค์šด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ํฐ ์ด์œ ๋Š” ์ด์•Œ์ด ์—†๋Š”๋ฐ ์ด๋งŒ ๋“ค๊ณ  ์žˆ๊ธฐ ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์ด์—์š”. ์ค€๋น„ ์—†์ด "์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ๋“  ๋˜๊ฒ ์ง€"๋Š” ์‹ค์ œ ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ ํ†ตํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

โ–ถ ์Šค๋ชฐํ† ํฌ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” 3๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•
1๏ธโƒฃ ๋Œ€์ƒ์„ ๋ช…ํ™•ํžˆ ํ•˜๊ธฐ
ํšŒ์‚ฌ ๋™๋ฃŒ์ธ๊ฐ€์š”? ๊ตํšŒ ๋ชจ์ž„์ธ๊ฐ€์š”? ๋Œ€ํ™” ์ƒ๋Œ€๊ฐ€ ๋‹ค๋ฅด๋ฉด ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋Š” ์งˆ๋ฌธ๋„ ๋‹ฌ๋ผ์•ผ ํ•ด์š”.

2๏ธโƒฃ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ๋จผ์ € ๋˜์งˆ ์งˆ๋ฌธ 5~10๊ฐœ ๋งŒ๋“ค๊ธฐ
- ๋‚ ์”จ๋‚˜ ์ฃผ๋ง ๊ณ„ํš ๋ฌป๊ธฐ
- ์ถœ์‹  ๋‚˜๋ผ๋‚˜ ๊ฑฐ์ฃผ ๊ธฐ๊ฐ„ ๋ฌป๊ธฐ
- ์ตœ๊ทผ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๋‚˜ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์‚ฌ ๋ฌป๊ธฐ
์ด๊ฑด ์™ธ์›Œ๋„ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์•„์š”. ์‹œ๋ฎฌ๋ ˆ์ด์…˜์ด๋‹ˆ๊นŒ์š”.

3๏ธโƒฃ ๋‹ต๋ณ€์— ๋งž๋ฐ›์•„์น˜๋Š” ์—ฐ์Šต๋„ ํ•จ๊ป˜ํ•˜๊ธฐ
์งˆ๋ฌธ๋งŒ ์ค€๋น„ํ•˜๋ฉด ๋ฐ˜์ชฝ์ด์—์š”. ์ƒ๋Œ€๋ฐฉ ๋Œ€๋‹ต์— ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ๋ฐ›์•„์น ์ง€๋„ ๊ฐ™์ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด ๋‘์„ธ์š”.

Q2. ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ๋Š˜๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฑด์ง€ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์•Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”?

โ€ผ๏ธํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜์กฐ์˜ ๋‹ต๋ณ€

๊ธฐ๋ถ„์œผ๋กœ ์˜์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ์ธก์ •ํ•˜๋ฉด ํ•ญ์ƒ ๋ถˆ์•ˆํ•  ์ˆ˜๋ฐ–์— ์—†์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ๊ต‰์žฅํžˆ ๋งŽ์€ ๋ถ„๋“ค์ด ๋ถˆ์•ˆ์„ ๋А๋‚๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

"์š”์ฆ˜ ๋ญ”๊ฐ€ ๋А๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„" vs "์š”์ฆ˜ ๋ณ„๋กœ ์•ˆ ๋А๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„"

์ธก์ • ๊ธฐ์ค€์ด ์—†์œผ๋ฉด ๊ฐ์ •์ด ํŒ๋‹จ์„ ๋Œ€์‹ ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
๐Ÿ‘‰ํ•œ ๋‹ฌ ์ „ ๋…น์Œ ํŒŒ์ผ๊ณผ ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋…น์Œ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜๊ธฐ
๐Ÿ‘‰ํ•œ ๋‹ฌ ์ „ ์“ด ์˜์–ด ๋ฌธ์žฅ๊ณผ ์ง€๊ธˆ ๋ฌธ์žฅ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜๊ธฐ

๋‚จ์ด๋ž‘ ์ ˆ๋Œ€ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜์ง€ ๋งˆ์„ธ์š”. 1๊ฐœ์›”์งœ๋ฆฌ ๋‚˜์™€, 2๊ฐœ์›”์งœ๋ฆฌ ๋‚˜๋ฅผ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์ด ํ‘œํ˜„์„ ๊ผญ ์จ๋ณด๊ฒ ๋‹ค๋ฅผ ํ•˜๋‚˜ ์ •ํ•˜๊ณ  ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€์„ธ์š”. ๋งฅ๋ฝ์ด ์‚ด์ง ์•ˆ ๋งž์•„๋„ ๊ดœ์ฐฎ์•„์š”. ์–ต์ง€๋กœ๋ผ๋„ ์จ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ์ž์ฒด๊ฐ€ ํ›ˆ๋ จ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๋ฐฐ์šด ๊ฑธ ์‹ค์ „์—์„œ ๊บผ๋‚ด ์“ธ ๋•Œ, ๊ทธ ๋‹จ์–ด์™€ ํ‘œํ˜„์— ์ถ”์–ต์ด ์‹ฌ์–ด์ง€๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”. ๊ทธ ์ถ”์–ต์ด ์Œ“์ด๋ฉด ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋‚˜์˜ค๊ธฐ ์‹œ์ž‘ํ•ด์š”.

03) ๋‹จ์–ด๋Š” ๋‹ค ์•„๋Š”๋ฐ, ์™œ ๋“ค์„ ๋•Œ ์ดํ•ด๊ฐ€ ์•ˆ ๋˜๋‚˜์š”?

๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์•„๋Š” ๋ฐ๋Š” ์„ธ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ธต์œ„๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

1๏ธโƒฃ๋ˆˆ์œผ๋กœ ์•„๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด ๐Ÿ‘‰ ์ฝ์œผ๋ฉด ์˜๋ฏธ๊ฐ€ ๋ณด์ด๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด
2๏ธโƒฃ๊ท€๋กœ ์•„๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด ๐Ÿ‘‰ ๋“ค์—ˆ์„ ๋•Œ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์— ์ดํ•ด๋˜๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด
3๏ธโƒฃ์ž…์œผ๋กœ ์•„๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด ๐Ÿ‘‰ ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด

์œ„๋กœ ๊ฐˆ์ˆ˜๋ก ๋ฒ”์œ„๊ฐ€ ๋„“์–ด์š”. 1์ธต์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋„“๊ณ , 3์ธต์ด ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ข์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋‹ˆ๊นŒ ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์œผ๋ฉด ๋“ค๋ฆฐ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋ง์ด ๋‚˜์˜ค๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”.

์ฝ๊ธฐ๋Š” ๋“ฃ๊ธฐ๋ณด๋‹ค ํ‰๊ท  1.5๋ฐฐ์—์„œ 2๋ฐฐ ๋น ๋ฆ…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ˆˆ์œผ๋กœ ๋ดค์„ ๋•Œ ์ดํ•ด ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋ผ๋„, ๊ท€๋กœ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์— ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌํ•  ๋งŒํผ ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํžˆ ์ต์ˆ™ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

์—ฌ๊ธฐ์— ๊ธด์žฅ๊ฐ์ด ๋”ํ•ด์ง€๋ฉด์š”. ์™ธ๊ตญ์ธ์ด ๊ฐ‘์ž๊ธฐ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์„ ๋”ฑ ํ–ˆ์„ ๋•Œ, ์•„๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด๋„ ๊ทธ ์ˆœ๊ฐ„ ๋‚ ์•„๊ฐ‘๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋˜ ํ•˜๋‚˜, ์•„๋Š” ๋‹จ์–ด์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ ๋œป์ด ์•„๋‹ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด์„œ 'take' ๋‹จ์–ด ํ•˜๋‚˜์—๋Š” ๋œป์ด 42๊ฐ€์ง€๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”. 'take the subway'๋Š” ์ „์ฒ  ํƒ€๋Š” ๊ฑฐ๊ณ , 'take a test'๋Š” ์‹œํ—˜ ๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฑฐ๊ณ , 'takes time'์€ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์ด ๊ฑธ๋ฆฐ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ๋ˆˆ์œผ๋กœ๋Š” ์•„๋Š” ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™์•„๋„, ๋ง‰์ƒ ๊ทธ ์ˆœ๊ฐ„ ํ•œ ๋ฒˆ์— ๋ชป ๋“ค์„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์ฃ .

๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋”•ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์„ ์ถ”์ฒœ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋”•ํ…Œ์ด์…˜์„ ํ•ด์„œ ๊ท€๊ฐ€ ํ›ˆ๋ จ๋˜๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์•„๋‹™๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์–ด๋–ค ๋‹จ์–ด์—์„œ ๋ง‰ํžˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๋ฐœ๊ฒฌํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด์„œ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ๋‹จ์–ด๋ฅผ ์•ˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋Š” ๋ถ„์ผ์ˆ˜๋ก ๋ง‰์ƒ ํ•ด๋ณด๋ฉด ์ƒ๊ฐ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋งŽ์ด ๋ง‰ํ˜€์š”. ๊ทธ ์›์ธ์„ ์ง์ ‘ ์ฐพ์œผ์…”์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.
๋‹˜๋„ ์˜์–ด ๊ณ ๋ฏผ์„ ํ•ด๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‚˜์š”? ๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด <์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ  ๋ถ€ํŠธ์บ ํ”„> ๋Œ€๊ธฐ ์‹ ์ฒญ์„ ํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜์กฐ๊ฐ€ 1:1 ์ „ํ™” ์ƒ๋‹ด์„ ๋ฌด๋ฃŒ๋กœ ํ•ด๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. (์„ ์ฐฉ์ˆœ 20๋ช…) 


์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ด ์ „ํ™” ์ƒ๋‹ด์„ ํ•˜๊ณ  "์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์˜์–ด ๊ณต๋ถ€๋ฅผ ํ•ด์•ผ ํ• ์ง€ ๋ฐฉํ–ฅ์„ ์žก์•˜๋‹ค"๋Š” ๋ง์„ ์ œ์ผ ๋งŽ์ด ๋“ฃ๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜์กฐ๊ฐ€ ์ง์ ‘ ๋“ฃ๊ณ , ์ง€๊ธˆ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์„ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ๋‹ต๋ณ€๋“œ๋ฆฌ๊ฒ ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.


๐Ÿ‘‰ ๋Œ€๊ธฐ๋ฆฌ์ŠคํŠธ ์‹ ์ฒญํ•˜๊ณ  ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜์กฐ์—๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๋‹ด ๋ฐ›๊ธฐ

3. ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์—์„œ๋Š” "์˜ค๋Š˜์ด ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋‚ "์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๋ฉ”์ผ์ด ์˜ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ ?!

์ถœ๊ทผํ•ด์„œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์—ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ "์˜ค๋Š˜์ด ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๊ทผ๋ฌด์ผ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค"๋ผ๊ณ  ์ ํ˜€ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด ์–ด๋–จ๊นŒ์š”? ์ƒ์ƒ๋งŒ ํ•ด๋„ ์•„์ฐ”ํ•˜์ฃ . ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๋ฐ ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์—์„œ๋Š” ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ผ์–ด๋‚  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ์ผ์ด์—์š”. ๊ทธ ์ด์œ ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ผ๊นŒ์š”? ์™œ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ œ๋„๊ฐ€ ์ƒ๊ฒผ๋Š”์ง€, ์‹ค์ œ ๋ถ„์œ„๊ธฐ๋Š” ์–ด๋–ค์ง€ ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜ Kayla๊ฐ€ ์•„ํ‹ฐํด์— ๋‹ด์•„์คฌ์–ด์š”.


๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ๋ณธ๋ฌธ ์ฒซ ๋ฌธ์žฅ โ€œImagine walking into work one day and opening an email that says today is your last dayโ€ ์—์„œ says๋ฅผ ์ฐพ์•„๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ํ•œ๊ตญ์–ด๋กœ๋Š” '์ ํ˜€ ์žˆ๋‹ค'๋ผ๊ณ  ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์›์–ด๋ฏผ์€ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ ๋™์‚ฌ say๋ฅผ ์จ์š”. ์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ  ํ‘œํ˜„์ด๋‹ˆ ๊ผญ ๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์„ธ์š”!


โœ… ๊ธ€: ๋ฏธ๊ตญ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜ Kayla

โœ… ๋ฒˆ์—ญ: ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜ Renee


(๋Ÿฌ๋„ˆ๋ธ”๋ ˆํ„ฐ์˜ ๊ฝƒ์ธ '๋ฏธ๊ตญ/ํ˜ธ์ฃผ ๋ฌธํ™”' ์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ ๋Š” ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜๊ฐ€ ์ง์ ‘ ์ž‘์„ฑํ•˜๊ณ , ์ „๋ฌธ ๋ฒˆ์—ญ๊ฐ€๊ฐ€ ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ ์‰ฌ์šด ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋ง๋กœ ๋ฒˆ์—ญํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”. AI๊ฐ€ ์•„๋‹Œ, ์‚ด์•„์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒฝํ—˜์ด ๋‹ด๊ธด ์ง„์งœ ์ด์•ผ๊ธฐ๋ž๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์•ž์œผ๋กœ๋„ ์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ ์™€ ๋ฌธํ™”๋ฅผ ๋Ÿฌ๋„ˆ๋ธ”์ด ๊ผผ๊ผผํžˆ ์ฑ™๊ฒจ๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š”๐Ÿ˜Š)

๐ŸขCan You Really Get Fired Anytime in America?
๋ฏธ๊ตญ์—์„œ๋Š” ์ •๋ง ์–ธ์ œ๋“  ํ•ด๊ณ ๋‹นํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„๊นŒ์š”? 

Imagine walking into work one day and opening an email that says today is your last day. While it isn't necessarily common, it's something that could actually happen in America.
์–ด๋А ๋‚  ํ‰์†Œ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ์ถœ๊ทผํ•ด์„œ ์ด๋ฉ”์ผ์„ ์—ด์—ˆ๋Š”๋ฐ, ์˜ค๋Š˜์ด ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๊ทผ๋ฌด์ผ์ด๋ผ๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์ด ์ ํ˜€ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ์ƒํ•ด ๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๊ผญ ํ”ํ•œ ์ผ์€ ์•„๋‹ˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์—์„œ๋Š” ์‹ค์ œ๋กœ ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ผ์ด ์ผ์–ด๋‚  ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

Most states follow the principle of at-will employment. This means an employer can generally fire an employee at any time without giving a reason or advance notice. Similarly, employees can quit whenever they want without giving a reason.
๋ฏธ๊ตญ์˜ ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ์ฃผ์—์„œ๋Š” '์ž„์˜๊ณ ์šฉ์ œ(at-will employment)'๋ผ๋Š” ์›์น™์„ ๋”ฐ๋ฅด๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ์ด๋Š” ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ๋ฐํžˆ๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ์‚ฌ์ „์— ํ†ต๋ณดํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ ๋„ ์–ธ์ œ๋“  ์ง์›์„ ํ•ด๊ณ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋œป์ด์—์š”. ๋งˆ์ฐฌ๊ฐ€์ง€๋กœ ์ง์›๋“ค๋„ ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ๋ฐํžˆ์ง€ ์•Š๊ณ  ์›ํ•  ๋•Œ ์–ธ์ œ๋“  ์ผ์„ ๊ทธ๋งŒ๋‘˜ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

However, just because employers don't have to give a reason doesn't mean they can fire you for absolutely any reason. U.S. law protects workers against discrimination based on factors such as age, sex, religion, and sexual orientation.
ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ํ•ด๊ณ  ์ด์œ ๋ฅผ ๋ฐํž ํ•„์š”๊ฐ€ ์—†๋‹ค๊ณ  ํ•ด์„œ, ์–ด๋–ค ์ด์œ ๋กœ๋“  ๋งˆ์Œ๋Œ€๋กœ ํ•ด๊ณ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๋œป์€ ์•„๋‹ˆ์—์š”. ๋ฏธ๊ตญ ๋ฒ•์€ ๋‚˜์ด, ์„ฑ๋ณ„, ์ข…๊ต, ์„ฑ์  ์ง€ํ–ฅ ๋“ฑ์„ ์ด์œ ๋กœ ๊ทผ๋กœ์ž๊ฐ€ ์ฐจ๋ณ„๋ฐ›์ง€ ์•Š๋„๋ก ๋ณดํ˜ธํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

This might be surprising to people in other countries, where laws often place more emphasis on job security. So why does America make it relatively easy to fire someone?
๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๋‚˜๋ผ์—์„œ๋Š” ๋ฒ•์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ณ ์šฉ ์•ˆ์ •์„ฑ์„ ๋” ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์—ฌ๊ธฐ๋Š” ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ์•„์„œ, ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ ๋‚˜๋ผ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ๋Š” ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ œ๋„๊ฐ€ ๋†€๋ž๊ฒŒ ๋А๊ปด์งˆ ์ˆ˜๋„ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๋ฉด ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์—์„œ๋Š” ์™œ ์ƒ๋Œ€์ ์œผ๋กœ ์ง์›์„ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ํ•ด๊ณ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฑธ๊นŒ์š”?

It comes down to freedom of contract. If employees have the freedom to leave a job whenever they want, employers should generally have the same freedom. Supporters also argue that this gives businesses more flexibility. However, critics point out that it's often much easier for a company to replace a worker than for that worker to find a new job.
ํ•ต์‹ฌ์€ ๊ณ„์•ฝ์˜ ์ž์œ ์— ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ์ง์›์ด ์›ํ•  ๋•Œ ์–ธ์ œ๋“  ์ง์žฅ์„ ๊ทธ๋งŒ๋‘˜ ์ž์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ์—๊ฒŒ๋„ ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ™์€ ์ž์œ ๊ฐ€ ์žˆ์–ด์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฑฐ์ฃ . ์ด ์ œ๋„๋ฅผ ์ง€์ง€ํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ๋” ์œ ์—ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์šด์˜๋  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ ๋„ ์ฃผ์žฅํ•ด์š”. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์ด ์ œ๋„๋ฅผ ๋น„ํŒํ•˜๋Š” ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ์ง์›์ด ์ƒˆ ์ง์žฅ์„ ๊ตฌํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋ณด๋‹ค ๊ธฐ์—…์ด ๊ทธ ์ง์›์„ ๋Œ€์ฒดํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ํ›จ์”ฌ ์‰ฌ์šด ๊ฒฝ์šฐ๊ฐ€ ๋งŽ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ง€์ ํ•ด์š”.

All that being said, Americans aren't living in constant fear that today will be their last day. Most companies don't fire people randomly. They often have performance reviews, disciplinary procedures, and internal policies. So, while Americans don't have total job security, many trust that their employers won't fire them just because they can.
๊ทธ๋ ‡๋‹ค๊ณ  ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์ธ๋“ค์ด ์˜ค๋Š˜์ด ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๊ทผ๋ฌด์ผ์ด ๋ ๊นŒ ๋ด ๋Š˜ ๋ถˆ์•ˆํ•ดํ•˜๋ฉฐ ์‚ฌ๋Š” ๊ฑด ์•„๋‹ˆ์—์š”. ๋Œ€๋ถ€๋ถ„์˜ ํšŒ์‚ฌ๋Š” ์ง์›์„ ๋ฌดํ„ฑ๋Œ€๊ณ  ํ•ด๊ณ ํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š์•„์š”. ๋ณดํ†ต ์—…๋ฌด ์„ฑ๊ณผ ํ‰๊ฐ€๋‚˜ ์ง•๊ณ„ ์ ˆ์ฐจ, ํšŒ์‚ฌ ๋‚ด๋ถ€ ๊ทœ์ • ๋“ฑ์ด ๋งˆ๋ จ๋˜์–ด ์žˆ๊ฑฐ๋“ ์š”. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ๋ฏธ๊ตญ์ธ๋“ค์ด ๊ณ ์šฉ์„ ์™„์ „ํžˆ ๋ณด์žฅ๋ฐ›๋Š” ๊ฑด ์•„๋‹ˆ์ง€๋งŒ, ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์€ ๊ณ ์šฉ์ฃผ๊ฐ€ ํ•ด๊ณ ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ถŒํ•œ์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ์ด์œ ๋งŒ์œผ๋กœ ์ž์‹ ์„ ํ•ด๊ณ ํ•˜์ง€๋Š” ์•Š์„ ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๊ณ  ๋ฏฟ์–ด์š”. 
โ“โ— ์œ„ ๊ธ€์„ ์ฝ๊ณ  2๊ฐ€์ง€ ์งˆ๋ฌธ์— ๋Œ€ํ•œ ๋ณธ์ธ ์ƒ๊ฐ์„ ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋งํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”!


Q1) How do you feel about job security in Korea?

ํ•œ๊ตญ์˜ ๊ณ ์šฉ ์•ˆ์ •์„ฑ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋‚˜์š”?


Q2) Do you feel like you can quit your job at any time in Korea? Why or why not?

ํ•œ๊ตญ์—์„œ๋Š” ์›ํ•  ๋•Œ ์–ธ์ œ๋“  ์ง์žฅ์„ ๊ทธ๋งŒ๋‘˜ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ค๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๋‚˜์š”? ๊ทธ ์ด์œ ๋Š” ๋ฌด์—‡์ธ๊ฐ€์š”? 

์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ ๋ฅผ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๊ณ  ์‹ถ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ๋Ÿฌ๋„ˆ๋ธ”์ด 2๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์œผ๋กœ ๋„์™€๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š”.


<์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ  ๋ถ€ํŠธ์บ ํ”„> : ํ˜„์žฌ ๋งค๋‹ฌ 350๋ช… ๊ฐ€๊นŒ์ด ์ฐธ์—ฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์–ด์š”. 10๊ฐœ์›”๊ฐ„ ๋Ÿฌ๋„ˆ๋ธ”์ด ์ง์ ‘ ์ œ์ž‘ํ•œ ๊ณ ํ€„๋ฆฌํ‹ฐ ์ž๋ฃŒ์™€ ์ฒด๊ณ„์ ์ธ ํ•™์Šต๋ฒ•, ์ฒ ์ €ํ•œ ๋ณต์Šต ์‹œ์Šคํ…œ, ๋งž์ถค ์ผ€์–ด, ๋ผ์ด๋ธŒ ํŠน๊ฐ•, ๋ฏธ๊ตญ ์›์–ด๋ฏผ ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜์˜ 1:1 ์Šคํ”ผํ‚น ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฐฑ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋‘ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฌด์—‡๋ณด๋‹ค ๋งค์ผ ์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ์ ‘ํ•˜๋Š” ์Šต๊ด€์„ ์™„์„ฑํ•˜์—ฌ, ์˜์–ด๋กœ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๋งํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋„๋ก ์ฑ…์ž„์ง€๊ณ  ๋ณ€ํ™”์‹œ์ผœ ๋“œ๋ฆด๊ฒŒ์š”.


<์—๋ฐ€๋ฆฌ, ํŒŒ๋ฆฌ์— ๊ฐ€๋‹ค 400๋ฌธ์žฅ> : ๊ทธ๋™์•ˆ ๋ฏธ๋“œ ์Šคํฌ๋ฆฝํŠธ๋ฅผ ์ „๋ถ€ ์•”๊ธฐํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ๋‚˜์š”? ์ด์ œ ๊ทธ๋Ÿด ํ•„์š” ์—†์–ด์š”. ๋Ÿฌ๋„ˆ๋ธ”์ด ์ง์ ‘ ๋ฏธ๋“œ ์—๋ฐ€๋ฆฌ ์‹œ์ฆŒ 1~4์—์„œ ์˜์–ด์‹ ์‚ฌ๊ณ ๊ฐ€ ๋‹ด๊ธด 400๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์„ ๋ณ„ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฐ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์—๋Š” ํ‹ฐ์ฒ˜์กฐ์˜ ์ƒ์„ธํ•œ ํ•ด์„ค๊ณผ Think in English, Mp3 ์Œ์› ํŒŒ์ผ, ๋ณต์Šต์„ ๋•๋Š” ํ€ด์ฆˆ๊นŒ์ง€ ๋ชจ๋‘ ๋‹ด๊ฒจ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ˆ„์  1,500๊ถŒ ์ด์ƒ ํŒ๋งค๋œ ๋Ÿฌ๋„ˆ๋ธ” ๋Œ€ํ‘œ ์ „์ž์ฑ…์ด์—์š”. ๋ฏธ๋“œ ์ „์ฒด ์Šคํฌ๋ฆฝํŠธ๋ฅผ ๊ณต๋ถ€ํ•˜๊ธฐ ๋ถ€๋‹ด์Šค๋Ÿฝ๋‹ค๋ฉด, ์ด ์ „์ž์ฑ…์„ ์ถ”์ฒœ๋“œ๋ฆฝ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค!

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