μ•ˆλ…•ν•˜μ„Έμš”. λ‹˜! λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ” λ§€λ‹ˆμ € λ¦°μ§€μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€.


μš”μ¦˜ AIκ°€ 세상을 λ°”κΎΈλŠ” λͺ¨μŠ΅μ„ 보며 생각이 λ§Žμ•„μ‘Œμ–΄μš”. λ²ˆμ—­λ„, λ¬Έμž₯도, 정닡도 이제 λͺ‡ 초면 얻을 수 있죠. 그런데 ν•œ κ°€μ§€λŠ” μ—¬μ „νžˆ λ°”λ€Œμ§€ μ•ŠμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ°”λ‘œ AIκ°€ 우리λ₯Ό 'μ‹€ν–‰'ν•˜κ²Œ ν•΄μ£Όμ§€ μ•ŠλŠ”λ‹€λŠ” κ²ƒμ΄μ—μš”.


κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ”μ€ 쒋은 μ˜μ–΄ μ½˜ν…μΈ λ₯Ό μ œμž‘ν•˜λ©΄μ„œ, λ‹˜μ΄ μ‹€ν–‰ν•  수 있게 λ„μ™€μ£ΌλŠ” κ΅μœ‘λΈŒλžœλ“œκ°€ 되렀고 ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 7λ…„ μ „ λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ”μ„ μ‹œμž‘ν•  λ•ŒλΆ€ν„° 맀일 과제λ₯Ό μΈμ¦ν•˜λŠ” μ΄μœ κ°€ λ°”λ‘œ κ·Έκ±°μ˜€μ–΄μš”. "μ§„μ§œ μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό ν•˜κ²Œ λ§Œλ“€κΈ° μœ„ν•΄μ„œ!"


κ·Έλ ‡κ²Œ μ‹€ν–‰ν•˜λ©΄ 일상과 컀리어가 λ³€ν•  μˆ˜λ°–μ— μ—†μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 졜근 8κΈ° μˆ˜κ°•μƒμ€ 발리둜 μ˜μ–΄ μ˜λ£Œλ΄‰μ‚¬λ₯Ό λ‹€λ…€μ™”κ³ , 4κΈ° μˆ˜κ°•μƒμ€ μ˜μ–΄ μ›μ„œ 1κΆŒμ„ μ™„λ…ν–ˆκ³ , 6κΈ° μˆ˜κ°•μƒμ€ 원어민과 100% μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ λŒ€ν™”λ₯Ό ν•˜κ³  μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ²°κ΅­ μ˜μ–΄λŠ” μ‹€ν–‰ν•˜λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒμ΄ μž˜ν•˜κ²Œ λ©λ‹ˆλ‹€.


λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ”λ ˆν„°λ„ λ§ˆμ°¬κ°€μ§€μ˜ˆμš”. 읽고 λλ‚˜λŠ” μ½˜ν…μΈ κ°€ μ•„λ‹ˆλΌ, 직접 말해보고 써보게 λ§Œλ“œλŠ” λ ˆν„°κ°€ 되렀고 ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 였늘 λ ˆν„°λ₯Ό λ‹€ 읽고 직접 μ‹€ν–‰ν•΄λ³΄μ„Έμš”.


1. '셔츠에 μ†ŒμŠ€ λ¬»μ—ˆμ–΄.'λ₯Ό μ˜μ–΄μ‹ μ‚¬κ³ λ‘œ λ§ν•˜λ©΄?

❓ 였늘의 μ˜μ–΄μ‹ 사고 ν€΄μ¦ˆ


점심 λ‹€ λ¨Ήκ³  μ‚¬λ¬΄μ‹€λ‘œ λŒμ•„κ°€λŠ” κΈΈ, λ™λ£Œμ—κ²Œ 셔츠에 μ†ŒμŠ€κ°€ λ¬»μ—ˆλ‹€κ³  μ•Œλ €μ€¬μ–΄μš”. "셔츠에 μ†ŒμŠ€ λ¬»μ—ˆμ–΄μš”."


이 말, μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ μ–΄λ–»κ²Œ ν‘œν˜„ν• κΉŒμš”?
πŸ‘‰ ___________________________________________.

You have sauce on your shirt.

셔츠에 μ†ŒμŠ€ λ¬»μ—ˆμ–΄.

1️⃣ Teacher Joe's Tip

κΈ°λ³Έ 동사 have의 μ“°μž„μƒˆλŠ” λ¬΄κΆλ¬΄μ§„ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 예λ₯Ό λ“€μ–΄, λ°₯을 λ¨Ήλ‹€κ°€ 셔츠에 μ†ŒμŠ€κ°€ 묻은 상황을 κ°€μ •ν•΄ λ³Όκ²Œμš”. μ΄λ•Œ '묻닀'에 ν•΄λ‹Ήν•˜λŠ” μ˜μ–΄ 단어λ₯Ό λ– μ˜¬λ¦¬κΈ°λ³΄λ‹€λŠ”, β€˜μ†ŒμŠ€λ₯Ό 셔츠에 κ°€μ§€κ³  μžˆλ‹€β€™λŠ” μ‹μœΌλ‘œ ν‘œν˜„ν•˜λŠ” 게 더 μ˜μ–΄μ‹μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. β€œYou have sauce on your shirt.β€μ²˜λŸΌμš”. 특히 on은 ν‘œλ©΄μ— λ­”κ°€ λΆ™μ—ˆμ„ λ•Œ 자주 μ“°μ΄λ―€λ‘œ onκΉŒμ§€ ν†΅μ§Έλ‘œ μ΅ν˜€λ‘λŠ” κ±Έ μΆ”μ²œν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 예λ₯Ό λ“€μ–΄, 어깨에 λ²Œλ ˆκ°€ 뢙은 상황이라면 β€œYou have a bug on your shoulder.β€λ‘œ ν‘œν˜„ν•  수 있죠. 그리고 have a bug와 on your shoulder에 관계λ₯Ό ꡳ이 λ²ˆμ—­ν•˜μ§€ μ•Šκ³ , 이 쑰합을 μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ λ°›μ•„λ“€μ΄λŠ” λ°μ„œ μ˜μ–΄μ‹ 사고가 λ‹¨λ‹¨ν•΄μ§‘λ‹ˆλ‹€. κ·ΈλŸ¬λ‹ˆ have somethingμ—μ„œ ν•œλ²ˆ λŠμ–΄μ£Όκ³ , onμ—μ„œ κ΅³νžˆκΈ°μ— λ“€μ–΄κ°€ λ³΄μ„Έμš”. λ’€μ—μ„œ on λŒ€μ‹  in이 λ“€μ–΄κ°€λŠ” λ¬Έμž₯도 λ‹€λ€„λ³΄κ² μŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.


2️⃣ Think in English

The phrase β€œhave something on” means that there is something on your body, clothes, or belongings. We say this when we notice a spot, stain, or dirt on someone’s clothes or body. It’s a friendly and polite way to let someone know they are dirty without embarrassing them.


3️⃣ 짧은 λ¬Έμž₯으둜 μ΄ν•΄ν•˜κΈ°

ex1) I think you have gum on the bottom of your shoe.

λ„ˆ μ‹ λ°œ 밑창에 껌 뢙은 것 κ°™μ•„.


ex2) You have a lot of cat fur on your pants. 

바지에 고양이 털이 μž”λœ© λ¬»μ—ˆμ–΄.


4️⃣ λŒ€ν™”λ‘œ λ°˜λ³΅ν•˜κΈ°

A: How do I look?

B: You look great, but you have some lipstick on your teeth. 

A: λ‚˜ μ–΄λ•Œ?

B: μ§„μ§œ λ©‹μžˆμ–΄, 근데 이에 λ¦½μŠ€ν‹±μ΄ 살짝 λ¬»μ—ˆμ–΄.

2. μ˜μ–΄ μ‹€λ ₯을 λ©ˆμΆ”κ²Œ ν•˜λŠ” μ΅œμ•…μ˜ AI μ‚¬μš©λ²•

λ‹˜, ν˜Ήμ‹œ 이런 적 μžˆμœΌμ‹ κ°€μš”? ChatGPTλ‚˜ Gemini에 ν•œκ΅­μ–΄ λ¬Έμž₯을 λ„£κ³  β€œμ˜μ–΄λ‘œ λ²ˆμ—­ν•΄μ€˜β€λΌκ³  μš”μ²­ν•˜κ±°λ‚˜ ν•„μš”ν•œ λ¬Έμž₯을 λŒ€μ‹  써달라고 ν•΄λ³Έ 적 μžˆμ§€ μ•Šλ‚˜μš”? νŽΈν•˜κ³  λΉ λ₯΄μ£ ! ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ κ·Έ λ°©μ‹μœΌλ‘œλŠ” μ˜μ–΄κ°€ 잘 λŠ˜μ§€ μ•ŠμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.


λ‚΄κ°€ μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 직접 μ“°λŠ” κ³Όμ •μ—μ„œ ν•œ 번 늘고, AIκ°€ 고쳐쀀 μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό λΉ„κ΅ν•˜λŠ” κ³Όμ •μ—μ„œ 또 ν•œ 번 μ‹€λ ₯이 λŠ˜κ±°λ“ μš”. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ 이 1λ¬Έμž₯을 κΌ­ κΈ°μ–΅ν•΄μ£Όμ„Έμš”.


β€œμ΄ˆμ•ˆμ€ 무쑰건 λ‚΄κ°€ μ“΄λ‹€.”

μ•„λž˜λŠ” μ‹€μ œ μˆ˜κ°•μƒμ΄ μ“΄ μ˜μ–΄ μΌκΈ°μž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. λ‹Ήμ—°νžˆ μ²˜μŒμ—” μ™„λ²½ν•˜μ§€ μ•Šμ•„μš”. μ–΄μƒ‰ν•œ ν‘œν˜„λ„ 있고, 직역도 μžˆμ—ˆμ£ .


ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ <첨삭 μ „ 버전>의 μ΄ˆμ•ˆμ„ 직접 μ“°κ³  β–Ά AIμ—κ²Œ 첨삭을 λ°›κ³  β–Ά <첨삭 ν›„> 버전과 λΉ„κ΅ν•˜λŠ” 과정을 λ°˜λ³΅ν•˜λ©° μ˜μ–΄ μ‹€λ ₯을 늘리고 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

AIλŠ” 'λŒ€ν•„ 도ꡬ'κ°€ μ•„λ‹ˆλΌ 'ꡐ정 도ꡬ'둜 써야 ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€.

AIμ—κ²Œ λŒ€μ‹  써달라고 ν•˜λ©΄ μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό 직접 μ¨λ³΄λŠ” 힘이 점점 μ•½ν•΄μ§ˆ κ±°μ˜ˆμš”. ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ μ΄ˆμ•ˆμ„ μ“΄λ‹€λ©΄ κ·Έ κ³Όμ •μ—μ„œ μ˜μ–΄ μ‹€λ ₯이 μ €μ ˆλ‘œ κΈΈλŸ¬μ§‘λ‹ˆλ‹€.


πŸ”₯였늘 λ°”λ‘œ μ΄λ ‡κ²Œ μ‹€μ²œν•΄λ³΄μ„Έμš”.

1️⃣ μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ 3~5λ¬Έμž₯ 직접 써보기

2️⃣ AIμ—κ²Œ 'λ‚΄κ°€ μ“΄ μ˜μ–΄ λ¬Έμž₯을 고쳐쀘. μ™œ μ΄λ ‡κ²Œ λ°”κΏ¨λŠ”μ§€λ„ μ„€λͺ…ν•΄μ€˜.'라고 μš”μ²­ν•˜κΈ°

3️⃣ μ²¨μ‚­λœ λ¬Έμž₯을 μž…μœΌλ‘œ 따라 읽어 보기


이 3λ‹¨κ³„λ§Œ 해도 AIλŠ” λ‹˜μ˜ 졜고의 μ˜μ–΄ ν‹°μ²˜κ°€ 될 κ±°μ˜ˆμš”.

맀일 μ΄ˆμ•ˆ μ“°κ³ , μ „μš© ν”Όλ“œλ°± μ±—λ΄‡μ—κ²Œ 첨삭받고 μ‹Άλ‹€λ©΄?

이제 λ¬Έμ œλŠ” μ—¬κΈ°μ„œ κ°ˆλ¦½λ‹ˆλ‹€. 혼자 ν•˜λ©΄ 'μ˜€λŠ˜μ€ κ·Έλƒ₯ ν•œκ΅­μ–΄λ‘œ μ“°κ³  λ²ˆμ—­ν•΄λ‹¬λΌκ³  ν• κΉŒ..'ν•˜λ©° λ‹€μ‹œ λŒμ•„κ°€κΈ° μ‰½κ±°λ“ μš”. κ·Έ ν•œ 번이 μŒ“μ΄λ©΄ μ΄ˆμ•ˆμ„ μ“°λŠ” μŠ΅κ΄€μ΄ μ‚¬λΌμ Έμš”. κ·Έλž˜μ„œ λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ”μ€ μ˜μ§€κ°€ μ•„λ‹ˆλΌ ν™˜κ²½μ„ λ§Œλ“€μ—ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.

λΆ€νŠΈμΊ ν”„μ—μ„œλŠ” 맀일 μ΄ˆμ•ˆμ„ μ“°κ³ , μ „μš© ν”Όλ“œλ°± μ±—λ΄‡μœΌλ‘œ 첨삭 λ°›κ³ , λΉ„κ΅ν•˜λ©° ν›ˆλ ¨ν•˜λŠ” ν™˜κ²½μ΄ λ§Œλ“€μ–΄μ Έ μžˆμ–΄μš”. μ˜μ–΄λŠ” '맀일 μ“°λŠ” μ‚¬λžŒ'이 λŠ‘λ‹ˆλ‹€. 맀일 직접 μ“°κ³ , ν”Όλ“œλ°± λ°›μœΌλ©° μ˜μ–΄ μ‹€λ ₯을 λŠ˜λ¦¬λŠ” ν™˜κ²½μ„ λ§Œλ‚˜κ³  μ‹Άλ‹€λ©΄ <μ˜μ–΄μ‹ 사고 λΆ€νŠΈμΊ ν”„> 19κΈ°μ—μ„œ μ‹œμž‘ν•˜μ„Έμš”!

πŸ”₯[λͺ¨μ§‘ D-2] 2/23(μ›”) μ˜€ν›„ 6μ‹œ λͺ¨μ§‘ πŸ‘‰ 19κΈ° μ‹ μ²­ν•˜κΈ° (μ„ μ°©μˆœ 40λͺ…)
3. λ―Έκ΅­ 학생듀은 μˆ˜μ—… λλ‚˜λ©΄ 곡뢀 μ•ˆ ν• κΉŒμš”?

λ―Έκ΅­μ—μ„œλŠ” β€˜λ°©κ³Όν›„ ν™œλ™β€™μ„ μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ 뭐라고 ν• κΉŒμš”? λ°”λ‘œ extracurricular activitiesμž…λ‹ˆλ‹€. curricular(κ΅μœ‘κ³Όμ •)에 extra(λ°–μ˜)λ₯Ό 뢙인 λ‹¨μ–΄μ˜ˆμš”. μ΄λ ‡κ²Œ μ΄ν•΄ν•˜λ‹ˆκΉŒ 훨씬 쉽죠. 그럼 λ―Έκ΅­ 학생듀은 μ‹€μ œλ‘œ μ–΄λ–€ extracurricular activitiesλ₯Ό ν• κΉŒμš”? μ•„λž˜ 아티클을 톡해 ν™•μΈν•΄λ³΄μ„Έμš”!


βœ… κΈ€: 미ꡭ인 ν‹°μ²˜ Kayla @dailyteacer_kayla

βœ… λ²ˆμ—­: ν‹°μ²˜ Renee @reneecho.ld


(λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ”λ ˆν„°μ˜ 꽃인 'λ―Έκ΅­ λ¬Έν™”' μ½˜ν…μΈ λŠ” 미ꡭ인 ν‹°μ²˜κ°€ 직접 μž‘μ„±ν•˜κ³ , μ „λ¬Έ λ²ˆμ—­κ°€κ°€ μ΄ν•΄ν•˜κΈ° μ‰¬μš΄ 우리말둜 λ²ˆμ—­ν•˜κ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”. μ±—GPTκ°€ μ•„λ‹Œ, μ‚΄μ•„μžˆλŠ” κ²½ν—˜μ΄ λ‹΄κΈ΄ μ§„μ§œ μ΄μ•ΌκΈ°λžλ‹ˆλ‹€. μ•žμœΌλ‘œλ„ μ˜μ–΄μ‹ 사고와 λ¬Έν™”λ₯Ό λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ”μ΄ 꼼꼼히 μ±™κ²¨λ“œλ¦΄κ²Œμš”πŸ˜Š)

πŸ› Extracurricular Activities in the US

미ꡭ의 κ³Όμ™Έ(λ°©κ³Όν›„) ν™œλ™


Extracurricular activities are very popular in the United States. They are activities students do outside regular classes, such as sports, arts, clubs, or volunteering. They are usually optional but highly encouraged in middle school, high school, and college. Many students join extracurriculars to improve their college applications, but they are also a great way to make friends, learn new skills, and have fun.

κ³Όμ™Έ ν™œλ™μ€ λ―Έκ΅­μ—μ„œ 인기가 λ§Žμ•„μš”. μ •κ·œ μˆ˜μ—… 외에 학생듀이 ν•˜λŠ” ν™œλ™μœΌλ‘œ, μŠ€ν¬μΈ Β·μ˜ˆμˆ Β·λ™μ•„λ¦¬Β·λ΄‰μ‚¬ν™œλ™ 등이 μžˆμ–΄μš”. 보톡 선택 μ‚¬ν•­μ΄μ§€λ§Œ 쀑학ꡐ, 고등학ꡐ, λŒ€ν•™κ΅μ—μ„œ 적극적으둜 ꢌμž₯λΌμš”. λ§Žμ€ 학생이 λŒ€ν•™ 지원에 도움이 λ˜λ„λ‘ κ³Όμ™Έ ν™œλ™μ— μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜λŠ”λ°μš”, 친ꡬλ₯Ό 사귀고 μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ κΈ°μˆ μ„ 배우며 즐거운 μ‹œκ°„μ„ λ³΄λ‚΄λŠ” 데에도 쒋은 λ°©λ²•μ΄μ—μš”.


Sports are one of the most common types of extracurricular activities. Boys and girls often play basketball, volleyball, baseball, or soccer. Sports help students stay active, make friends, and build teamwork skills. Music and arts activities are also very popular. Band, choir, and theater allow students to be creative, perform for others, and sometimes earn scholarships for their talents.

μŠ€ν¬μΈ λŠ” μ•„μ£Ό ν”ν•œ κ³Όμ™Έ ν™œλ™ 쀑 ν•˜λ‚˜μ˜ˆμš”. 남학생과 여학생 λͺ¨λ‘ λ†κ΅¬λ‚˜ 배ꡬ, 야ꡬ, 좕ꡬ 등을 자주 ν•΄μš”. μŠ€ν¬μΈ λŠ” 학생듀이 ν™œλ°œν•˜κ²Œ 움직이고, 친ꡬλ₯Ό 사귀며, νŒ€μ›Œν¬λ₯Ό κΈ°λ₯΄λŠ” 데에 도움이 λΌμš”. μŒμ•…κ³Ό 예술 ν™œλ™λ„ 인기가 λ§Žμ€λ°μš”. λ°΄λ“œ, 합창단, μ—°κ·Ή ν™œλ™μ€ 학생듀이 창의λ ₯을 λ°œνœ˜ν•˜κ³  λ‹€λ₯Έ μ‚¬λžŒλ“€ μ•žμ—μ„œ 곡연할 기회λ₯Ό μ€˜μš”. 재λŠ₯에 따라 μž₯ν•™κΈˆμ„ λ°›λŠ” κ²½μš°λ„ μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€.


Academic clubs are another option. Math league, chess, and robotics clubs give students a chance to compete, solve problems, and meet like-minded peers. Student leadership activities, such as student council or event committees, teach students responsibility, teamwork, and public speaking.

ν•™λ¬Έ κ΄€λ ¨ 동아리도 μžˆμ–΄μš”. μˆ˜ν•™ 리그, 체슀, λ‘œλ΄‡ λ™μ•„λ¦¬λŠ” μ„œλ‘œ κ²½μŸν•˜κ³  문제λ₯Ό ν•΄κ²°ν•˜λ©° λΉ„μŠ·ν•œ 관심사λ₯Ό κ°€μ§„ 또래λ₯Ό λ§Œλ‚  기회λ₯Ό μ€˜μš”. ν•™μƒνšŒλ‚˜ 행사 μœ„μ›νšŒ 같은 학생 리더십 ν™œλ™μ€ μ±…μž„κ°, νŒ€μ›Œν¬, λŒ€μ€‘ μ•žμ—μ„œ λ§ν•˜λŠ” λŠ₯λ ₯을 κ°€λ₯΄μ³μ£Όμ£ .


Finally, many students participate in volunteering. They might help at food pantries, clean public spaces, or assist the elderly. Some schools even require students to complete a certain number of volunteer hours each year.

λ§ˆμ§€λ§‰μœΌλ‘œ, λ§Žμ€ 학생이 λ΄‰μ‚¬ν™œλ™μ— μ°Έμ—¬ν•΄μš”. 학생듀은 ν‘Έλ“œ 뱅크(무료 μ‹λ£Œν’ˆ μ§€μ›μ†Œ)μ—μ„œ λ΄‰μ‚¬ν•˜κ±°λ‚˜ 곡곡μž₯μ†Œλ₯Ό μ²­μ†Œν•˜κ³  노인을 돕기도 ν•΄μš”. λ§€λ…„ 일정 μ‹œκ°„μ˜ λ΄‰μ‚¬ν™œλ™μ„ μ΄μˆ˜ν•˜λ„λ‘ μš”κ΅¬ν•˜λŠ” 학ꡐ도 μžˆμ–΄μš”.


Overall, extracurricular activities are an important part of school life in the U.S. They help students develop skills, meet new people, and explore their interests. Most students join multiple activities and enjoy the social, academic, and personal benefits they provide.

μ „λ°˜μ μœΌλ‘œ κ³Όμ™Έ ν™œλ™μ€ λ―Έκ΅­ ν•™κ΅μƒν™œμ—μ„œ μ€‘μš”ν•œ λΆ€λΆ„μ΄μ—μš”. 이런 ν™œλ™λ“€μ€ 학생듀이 λŠ₯λ ₯을 ν‚€μš°κ³ , μƒˆλ‘œμš΄ μ‚¬λžŒμ„ λ§Œλ‚˜λ©°, 관심사λ₯Ό νƒμƒ‰ν•˜λŠ” 데 도움이 되죠. λŒ€λΆ€λΆ„μ˜ 학생듀은 μ—¬λŸ¬ ν™œλ™μ— μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜λ©° μ‚¬νšŒμ , 학업적, 개인적 λ©΄μ—μ„œ 긍정적인 영ν–₯을 λ°›μ•„μš”.

❓❗ μœ„ 글을 읽고 2κ°€μ§€ μ§ˆλ¬Έμ— λŒ€ν•œ 본인 생각을 μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ λ§ν•΄λ³΄μ„Έμš”!

Q1) What extracurricular activity would you like to do? Why? 

μ–΄λ–€ κ³Όμ™Έ ν™œλ™μ„ 해보고 μ‹Άλ‚˜μš”? κ·Έ μ΄μœ λŠ” λ¬΄μ—‡μΈκ°€μš”?


Q2) What are the pros and cons of participating in extracurricular activities? 

κ³Όμ™Έ ν™œλ™μ— μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜λŠ” κ²ƒμ˜ μž₯단점은 λ¬΄μ—‡μΌκΉŒμš”?

μ˜μ–΄μ‹ 사고λ₯Ό 배우고 μ‹Άλ‹€λ©΄, λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ”μ΄ 2κ°€μ§€ λ°©λ²•μœΌλ‘œ λ„μ™€λ“œλ¦΄κ²Œμš”.


<μ˜μ–΄μ‹ 사고 200 λΆ€νŠΈμΊ ν”„> : ν˜„μž¬ 맀달 300λͺ… κ°€κΉŒμ΄ μ°Έμ—¬ν•˜κ³  μžˆμ–΄μš”. 10κ°œμ›”κ°„ λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ”μ΄ 직접 μ œμž‘ν•œ 고퀄리티 μžλ£Œμ™€ 체계적인 ν•™μŠ΅λ²•, μ² μ €ν•œ 볡슡 μ‹œμŠ€ν…œ, 맞좀 μΌ€μ–΄, 라이브 νŠΉκ°•, λ―Έκ΅­ 원어민 ν‹°μ²˜μ˜ 1:1 μŠ€ν”Όν‚Ή ν”Όλ“œλ°±κΉŒμ§€ λͺ¨λ‘ μ œκ³΅ν•©λ‹ˆλ‹€. 무엇보닀 맀일 μ˜μ–΄λ₯Ό μ ‘ν•˜λŠ” μŠ΅κ΄€μ„ μ™„μ„±ν•˜μ—¬, μ˜μ–΄λ‘œ μƒκ°ν•˜κ³  말할 수 μžˆλ„λ‘ μ±…μž„μ§€κ³  λ³€ν™”μ‹œμΌœ λ“œλ¦΄κ²Œμš”.


<에밀리, νŒŒλ¦¬μ— κ°€λ‹€ 400λ¬Έμž₯> : κ·Έλ™μ•ˆ λ―Έλ“œ 슀크립트λ₯Ό μ „λΆ€ μ•”κΈ°ν•˜κ³  μžˆμ—ˆλ‚˜μš”? 이제 그럴 ν•„μš” μ—†μ–΄μš”. λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ”μ΄ 직접 λ―Έλ“œ 에밀리 μ‹œμ¦Œ 1~4μ—μ„œ μ˜μ–΄μ‹ 사고가 λ‹΄κΈ΄ 400λ¬Έμž₯을 μ„ λ³„ν–ˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. 각 λ¬Έμž₯μ—λŠ” ν‹°μ²˜μ‘°μ˜ μƒμ„Έν•œ ν•΄μ„€κ³Ό Think in English, Mp3 μŒμ› 파일, λ³΅μŠ΅μ„ λ•λŠ” ν€΄μ¦ˆκΉŒμ§€ λͺ¨λ‘ 담겨 μžˆμŠ΅λ‹ˆλ‹€. λˆ„μ  1,500ꢌ 이상 판맀된 λŸ¬λ„ˆλΈ” λŒ€ν‘œ μ „μžμ±…μ΄μ—μš”. λ―Έλ“œ 전체 슀크립트λ₯Ό κ³΅λΆ€ν•˜κΈ° λΆ€λ‹΄μŠ€λŸ½λ‹€λ©΄, 이 μ „μžμ±…μ„ μΆ”μ²œλ“œλ¦½λ‹ˆλ‹€!

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